Haha... this is hilarious. You're such a good writer! You really should join the 'Dove. http://pub162.ezboard.com/bthedancingdove is the URL if you want to come visit us. You really should. Sorry to press you :) Good job on this!

::cracks up:: ::applauds through laughter:: Bravo, bravo! Wyldon! What entertainment!

thats well funny! Write some more quickly please!

*crawls back onto chair* oh man *gasp* that is *pant* soooo funny!! more, pleeeease!!

Ah, the director. I love her. She's just so good. And Jon and Thayet are just priceless. Update, update!

::chuckles:: Oh, the hilarity. Write on, write on.

funny!! more pleeease, and soon! this is the 1st 1 of these that i've seen!

OK this is bizarre... but hilarious..............

ahh...interesting. it's funny, too, so keep going. I have to admit it, i really wanna see everyone's reaction when alanna married jon. he he :) more, please!

good job...what happened to the other scenes???

Dang it! Now I have Pomp and Circumstance stuck in my head, in all its full orchestral glory. Oh well. I'll survive.

I have sympathy for the poor idiot director lady. She can't help her stupidity. ALthough it was pretty funny when Alanna killed her. And then the second time, when Neal goes, "Daddy"... That was classic. Good scene. Can't wait to see hwat you do with Maria, Sir TOby Belch, and Sir Andrew Aguecheek next scene. ::grins::

I love Twelth Night and I love TP...what more would I want? Please continue!

cool! I haven't actually read 12th night, but it sounds good. I love Jon! it cracked me up so bad when he does that expression and gets his way! yey! go Jon! Cool story, continue, please!

yay! finally my 2 favorite things united in a fanfic! If fanfiction be the food of love, write on!

lol...