| Reviews for The VIP Lounge Misadventures |
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Shadow117 3/26/13 . chapter 4 Why did you have that "TEN YEARS LATER" part? Did you maybe mean to put "TEN MINUTES LATER"? The easter egg was Amy chasing Sonic and Tails, A.K.A Miles Prower. On a side note, I hope this doesn't make the last Flamer Tier... |
JetH7 3/28/13 . chapter 1This was quite amusing. You should work on making things a little more clear (There were some points that I had trouble figuring out what was going), but all in all I enjoyed this. |
Ghostphoenix P.G 3/27/13 . chapter 4Oohhhh cant wait for April fools day...hope you all are enjoying this...shame I'm mnot getting reviews a lot...but don't worry...I manage... |
Ghostphoenix P.G 3/27/13 . chapter 3I love writing this...and im hoping people would start reading this and reviewing...but still nada...*shrugs* Well better get back to writing.*disappears* |
Phoenix of Decay 3/26/13 . chapter 4*Reads part about me*... *smiles* I wana know what happened when Red spilt a single cup of 'Magic.' And I wonder if the appearance of Ace has to do with the whole container of 'Magic' being dumped. It doesn't seem like its going to end well from what I can tell. Also what does Ace's appearance have to do with everyone being doomed? I guess we'll never know... Until a later chapter! Quick note: anyone wanting a full description of Ace can check my profile for it. Another note: I'm indifferent towards cliffhangers. If it's a really good one (like two main characters life depends on the choice someone makes next chapter) then I start wondering a lot of things. This one is good enough to get me thinking about why the pie gods hate us so much... Wait... Did you steal their sacred cherry pie again? Dang it! I told you not to! * Face palms and walks away* If I think of any good tier challenges I'll pm them to you as they come up... Until then, don't forget to drink your Pespi! |
Shadow117 3/22/13 . chapter 3 I'm very tempted to flame over this, but I won't. Instead I'll just ask a few question. Does this mean that the entire story about Dakota has been a lie, or did it happen to him in the past? I hope you'll either answer that or it will be answered in the next chapter... |
N30Force 3/23/13 . chapter 3You suck, now I'm a flamer! Now give me the reward of nothing! |
Phoenix of Decay 3/22/13 . chapter 3Like the idea of the tier system. I hope some goals are met! |
Ghostphoenix P.G 3/20/13 . chapter 2Hey guys...chapter two answer is...who else...it's GOD! Watch out for him...and his pie pranks. |
Ghostphoenix P.G 3/20/13 . chapter 1Hey guys the answers to the chapter 1 questions were...Sly Cooper: thieves in time... And My Little Pony...and the bonus question was...Pinkie Pie... |
Shadow117 3/17/13 . chapter 2 Sorry I didn't review the first chapter, I actually read it the day it was posted. Aside from that, this story is really random, but that doesn't matter because it's hilarious. Update soon. |
XxTheSomeonexX 3/17/13 . chapter 2Just gets more and more random every time. And by the way, you forgot to post the answers to the last chapter. |
Phoenix of Decay 3/17/13 . chapter 2Well, this was a funny chapter, hows about you start working on the third? |
Phoenix of Decay 3/14/13 . chapter 1I'm surpised there has only been 1 review for this so far! This is really good, and I hope to see more soon! |
Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 1 This is interesting, I wasn't expecting any of this randomness? I was laughing most of the time! As for the questions, sorry I don't know. Great intro, can't wait to see what happens next. |