This is wonderful. Please continue when you can.

I just finished watching the anime so this is my first BRS fanfic, and I am pleased. Liked the joke about her being hugged to death.
Are you going to make Dead Master powerless in the real world, or just weakened? Not a real fan when any powerful character is stripped of what them awesome, but it isn't a total deal breaker.

All in all, I enjoyed the story so far and hope for a quick update.

Great chapter.

Wow, a crying DM...

Keep up the good work.

Interesting..So in the real world Others have no superhuman abilities or was it just some temporary side-effect of crossing over to the real world?

Nice! Brilliant! I always wonder what happen if an Other were to appear in the real world. Guess their near-invulnerability doesn't work that well(though a if that were the case then Dead Master wouldn't be able to snap those nylon ropes, as they are surprisingly tough, and Dead master would have the strength of a little girl). Also great on giving us a perspective of an Other, their haven't been to many fanfics of it! Keep it up!

Great chapter. I like Dead Master's inner thoughts. Well done.
Keep up the good work!

This seems very interesting. Can't wait to see what BRS will do.

Hahaha at the end. Please continue when you can. I'll be looking forward to this story.