|Reviews for The Long Road Home|
| jessi 6/27/12 . chapter 1
| K.N 5/11/11 . chapter 1
Somehow I guessed it in the first 3 paragraphs xD Nice. Your writing has inspired me to look for more King Vegeta/Prince Vegeta Father/son fics due to the sheer awesomeness!
| Hallolo 5/27/10 . chapter 1
YAY!I knew it would be one of his parents! I have a feeling it is his mother rather than his father... Original POV, that makes it even more interesting!
Thanks a lot!
| gizmogal 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Wow, I thought it was Radditz. I didn't even consider King Vegeta. Good one.
| D4cHilliN 5/24/09 . chapter 1
Give me a cookie or something because I SO guessed who it was before I read the end :P
AWESOME fic though. Very original.
| AnimeGirl622 4/13/05 . chapter 1
OMG! I love how you write for Vegeta! YOU SO ROCK! I pretty muched guessed it was his dad but still go you!
Plz write more Vegeta! XD
| Garowyn 6/13/04 . chapter 1
Sad but otherwise written really well. )
| Shika.Tot 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Veggie story! Gotta love em...:)_
| Konneko-chan 3/20/04 . chapter 1
wOOt wOOt! ::does a victory dance:: yayy! i guessed it right from the beginning! hehehe...VERY good ficcy...and NO DBZ is complete without mentioning a certain demi-Saiya-jin... ::coughcoughGOHANcoughcough:: hehehe...keep up the good work! .
| GenieT 1/18/04 . chapter 1
*sniff* that's so sad...
*quote:* Your heart, which up until that point you hadn’t believed existed, broke, and you wept. You begged for Goku to avenge you and your people.
*points upward* i havent seen that episode... WHY HAVE I NOT SEEN THAT EPISODE!
| nikki 11/4/03 . chapter 1
i knew it! damn, that was good! you had fun writing it, i had fun reading it :)
| Thanatos Nemesis 6/16/03 . chapter 1
*sniff* Yeah i guessed... i was right too... That was REALLY good! I havent read something like that before... it was really origanal!
| IMpuLsIvE THouGhTS 5/18/03 . chapter 1
That was great. At first I thought it was frieza who was reflecting vegeta but the nI realized that it was his father. Good Job!
| Suiren 5/2/03 . chapter 1
I did. Mostly because I feel Vegeta has great love for his * (For those who are reading the reviews before the story). My bro thinks its just respect for the power hehad when Vegeta was little, but I know he loved him.
| Uchiha Mira 4/28/03 . chapter 1
*cackles insanely* I KNEW IT! *dances wildly around the room* I knew it I knew it I knew it!
Ahem... *carefully picks up composure off the ground*
Anyway...at first I thought it was Piccolo, but by the third paragraph, I think, my guess changed to King Vegeta... *lets out a war whoop* And I was right! Yahoo! You've given me my ego boost for the day! *bows grandoisely to you*
Your writing abilities are astounding. You handle various situations well, keep everyone in character, and shine new light on situations we all know that keeps them alive and interesting.
I absolutely LOVE your descriptions...I'm a big sucker for pretty descriptions, and yours were just beautiful. Your wording and eloquence just blew me away...you have a very mature writing style for someone only 17. Your vocabulary and control over descriptive devices are very impressive, to say the least.
As I'm sure you can see, I was very impressed by your work. I'll definitely be back when I can find the time! I'd love for you to check out some of my stuff, but I won't obligate you as I know how annoying it can be when reviewers ask that. (Don't worry, I reveiwed because I was impressed by your story, not for an excuse to try and recruit my own reviews! I hate that!)
Anyway, dahlink, I must be off as my bro needs the computer. Very good work, keep it up!