Damn! It's hard to find Xenosaga yaoi anywhere! Especially yaoi with Chaos in it. I love you! You made my day! ::hug:: Do keep writing Xenosaga yaoi. Your writing has good, solid imagery and is enjoyable to read. Truth be told, the first time I saw Matthews, I would never have paired him with anyone but this fic has got me liking the Matthews x Chaos pairing.

Do keep writing! ::throws confetti at you::

Hrm, very interesting contrast to "Caution! I Am Boozer!" XD I'm a sucker for concrete writing, and these paragraphs are definitely concrete. ^_^ The bit about the dress, and the lullaby at the end, add sort of a...hrm...creepy tinge to Matthew's intentions. O_o; Random note: have you ever read the book "Perfume?" The details about the scent of the dress remind me of that writing style.

Anyway, I really like this. ^^ I think I'll have to check out some of your other works. Keep up the good work! ^_~