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| FlamencoPenguin 2004-10-13 ch 1,  | abusebeautifully composed piece from start to finish. I love the image of Remus smiling as he wakes up and how you incorporate that smile and Sirius's feelings towards it throughout the whole book. angsty lovey sirius is so much fun to write! and to read! if there was ever a love story between the two puppies, i believe that Sirius would be the one to fall first, to initiate the romance great piece! -FlamencoPenguin |
| Max Schloss 2002-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abusePoor,poor Siri.Hey,if he's still lookin' for love,I'll take him.Or Remus.Or Snape. (I'm a sad sick puppy). More,please.It's a shame you aren't allowed to write NC-17,though.(Looks pointedly at ffn people). |
| yester 2002-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good exploration of Sirius' personality here. I thought the paragraphs where he goes from wondering whether to - uh - touch himself while watching Remus, to realising that he could blackmail Remus into anything, were very good. They expressed the light and dark sides of Mr. Black expertly. More from you, please? |
| linear magic 2002-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written stream of consciousness stuff. This is excellent and you've kept Sirius nicely in character, too. I'm off to look for more of your work now. |
| alskdfjlkd 2002-08-10 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely fic! Very cute. Your Sirius is truly adorable, his descriptions of Remus and of his own feelings are really sweet. I'm too sleepy for a review in detail, so this'll have to do. I really hope you write more Remus/Sirius. Of course Remus would top ;) |