Ahh, I've missed being able to keep up on this. Fine, fine work magistrate. The duel was a masterwork - and the way you /almost/ think Squall's the one who's going to get badly hurt - boom! Wow. Poor Squall. so many emotional issues that he just can't seem to escape. Very interesting parallels between Aya and Seifer. Yay, I say, for the likeability of Tiamat, even though I can't really say that I know what the dragon's up to. Anyways, I'm really enjoying this. And can't think of anything to say, because a contented sigh doesn't translate well into review form. Great ending for part one, and I'm /really/ looking forward to the next parts. *applause*

[".you look like you got into a fight with your comb and it won't speak to you any more."]

Oh man that cracked me up. A Lunar Cry? This is /nuts/! What have these kids gotten themselves into.? Great chapter. Loved the dialogue, and as always, I must feel sorry for Kam. Very neat work, pulling the whole chapter from Aya's unfortunate POV.

I'll try to only leave one review this time; sorry about the extra five from last time. I was having trouble with the submit button. ;) On to reviewing!

Once again I'm left unsure of who I pity more - this time, the debate is raging between Kamalyn and Squall. Loved the conversation between Squall and Tiamat, and Tiamat's name for Squall. And Rinoa being stern and commanding? SHOCK! ;D

I love your writing. The dialogue, the descriptions, the plot, and the emotions are all perfect...I wish, I wish I could write so easily like you can!

Great chapter. Gotta admit, Aya sure has guts - to leave everything and everyone behind like that.

Sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately...just get tired of having nothing to say except...er...great chapter. heh.

Q

Hm, why did I not see this? ::insane inane jealousy! ;) :: Anyway, is...most weird and scary. The fight was written beautifully and I L

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.

Yet another in depth descrptive story! Thats what I like, another great story. Keep it up!

Prodigy

Kamalyn describing events - really excellent idea. Nice one. *crosses fingers that Aya'll start tlking properly soon, (goshdarnit), and eagerly awaits next chapter*

i love this story so original so cute! Love it love it love it mah haha