 GreyLadyBast 8/14/02 . chapter 1Oi, now that previous review sinks to new lows of crappy reviewing. I just reread the thing and noticed I'm both redundant and switching pronouns without warning. I know better than both. Shame on me.
Still, I'm sure you get the gist of what I was attempting so badly to express. |
 GreyLadyBast 8/14/02 . chapter 6man, this just gets better and better! Poor Legolas. He really SHOULD have beaten her around the head for calling him Leggy. I feel so sorry for you. I DO hope he makes it thru this story with his wits intact. |
 Wayfarer 8/14/02 . chapter 6*Chortling madly* Woo-hoo! Tis a great and noble attempt at laying bare the truth of the afflictions caused by the dread being thinly disguised as perfect being of beauty .. such vapidity, sich egotism, such indecisiveness! No wonder the elements themselves bend under the weight of her 'beauty' *bleah*
More! :D
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*slinks off before the guardians of exma revisions thwacks head* |
 GreyLadyBast who isn't staying online long enough to bother logging in 8/13/02 . chapter 5 Oh god! This just gets better and better! Poor Legolas. Poor Frodo. Poor Aragorn; I DO so hope he gets his brain back sometime in the near future.
You are amoung the few writers who bring the quality around this place up. I look forward to more |
 Nacey 8/13/02 . chapter 4Don't underestimate the powers of the pouty face. It has the ability to make girls ovulate, and lactate, and coo. It's evil. |
 I lurk at godawful 8/13/02 . chapter 4 Rockin fic! This is fantastic! |
 GreyLadyBast 8/12/02 . chapter 4Oh no! Not the pouty-face thing! Save me! SAVE ME!
Seriously, this is funny, and well-written. Works for me. |
 E 8/12/02 . chapter 4 You are evil. Let me buy you a drink. |
 Silent Assassin 8/12/02 . chapter 4 ::falls off chair and bashes head against a bookcase, but is too busy howling with laughter to notice or care::
In the words of the two British chipmunks that occasionally come on during the Acme Hour (not Chip and Dale, that's Disney), brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I haven't laughed so hard since Java Green's 'The True Mary Sue'. Keep up the good work!
Finrod the Purple...oye...
::wanders off chuckling:: |
 Aralanthiriel 8/11/02 . chapter 3Wow! Another *awesome* parody! Once again, I love how you keep everyone in character, and descriptive style is simply beautiful. The talking bird was a very nice touch, and very funny.
Ah, poor poor Legolas. The torments he must endure!
Can't wait until the next chapter, where Enóreth tells her story (most likely a sob story, right?).
Keep up the good work!
Aralanthiriel |