 Chiba Bunny 3/28/12 . chapter 14Waaaaah! How come you're not continuing this? ;'(. Pretty please.. Have mercy and continue the story ;) |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 6 OMG! this chap was the best :D everything was so...i'm speechless or wordless right now hehe, you have definitely captured Goku/ChiChi's characters perfectly. Well enough of my rantings, in short..YOU'RE GREAT. |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 5 hmm...so the training begins and both of them will be there,thats very awesome. And if you haven't guessed it, i'm loving your story a lot. |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 4 I can't believe you killed them *starts crying my eyes out* its not fair ;( |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 3 I can't believe that radditz is like 10 times annoying then in the anime, hope he gets out of the story soon. |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 2 I hope she's alright.. |
 Just a reader 2/14/12 . chapter 1 Oh no,how could he ...GOKU KILL RADDITZ NOW! i know you can do it with picollo's help of course.. |
 Faith 3/14/11 . chapter 14 This story is awesome. Please continue so I can find out why the wall is protecting Chichi from Goku. |
 saffire 9/1/10 . chapter 14 This is the best DBZ fanfiction i have read; you have talent in story telling and i love how you potray one of my favourite characters - Chi-chi.
Please update soon. It will be a shame if this story is left. |
 Beggar 7/12/10 . chapter 14 plz continue the story! |
 Chichi 7/12/10 . chapter 14 well that was a suprising ending |
 SnowyNight 3/31/10 . chapter 14 Hey. That isn't where you should be ending this. This story is way too good for you to leave it like this! I love the twist you've provided to the original story line! Please Update soon! |
 Taeniaea 7/25/09 . chapter 14Great Story Plz PLz Update It Soon! |
 Aizou 6/22/08 . chapter 14Randomly came across this story and I love it!
5 years on... I still live in hope for an update :) |
 Afiong Bassey 6/28/05 . chapter 1 Oh you most update soon! I most find out what happens next! |