This is one of the best stories I have ever read (& I read a lot). Very good work.

:Claps his hands: very good. Goes right to the heart.

Wow! That was good! Really good! Madra. That was... Madra was the Yeerk moon. Darwin was her brother. The ones from Visser, right?

*SNIFF* Is the point of everything you write to make me cry? That's so sad. I love how Madra stuck with David, even though she knew he was wrong. What can I say? Another 10. As usual. :)

Wow. That was good. What's weird is that I had an idea for a fic almost exactly like this one. Now I guess I've gotta change it :^).

Very nice. I liked the new spin on the 'David Returns' sort of thing. Keep it up.

I seem to remember the sequel to this... *thinks back* Anyway, very very good. I really liked it. But, I also seem to remeber that David was ALIVE in the sequel, if there was one. Oh, the throbbing in my poor achin' head..

That. Was. Awesome. And this is coming form a non-hyper girl at 1 a.m. That. Was. Awesome. Amazing. GREAT! Superb twist on bringing Madra (V1 daughter) into it. My vocabulary cannot surpress how great this was. AMAZING!!!!

~glances at her own still-not-finished David story, then tears it into tiny little pieces~ Great story! Truthfully the best David story I've ever seen. ^_^

Awww.. how sweet.. how sad.. Ironic that Madra (It's *Madra Gervais*!) would share Visser One's love for sailing. Even more ironic that her boat was named Moonbeams, and her name is after the Yeerks' moon.. You could add onto that if you wanted, I would read it and it could be about Madra being reunited with V1.. Kudos! (whatever THAT means..)

That was well done. Geez, I'm bad at reviews, aren't I? Well, I liked it.

VERY different from other David stories. Wonderful, SD.

Fascinating idea, and an awesome writing job!

w..w..waaaaaaaaah! I loved the end! She seemed to accept that a rat was talking to her a lil quick, but other than that, I *loved* it! I think people show David as too bloodthirsty. You showed him in a more realistic light. :)