Poor David. That was the best thing I've read in years. Bravo! I wish you could have let him live. let him marry Visser 1's daughter. Let her then find her mother with him. Why'd you hae to kill him! wa! I give it a 10000000000 (no typo that's what it deserves 100000000000)

Cool. People who have have read Visser, know who Madra is, and if you haven't read visser, it doesn't matter. I like that. Although, Visser one didn't realize that she loved sailing until she infested Marcos mum. So realisticly speaking, Madra wouldn't have inherited the love for it. Anyhow, I really enjoyed this fic.

That was wild David's story was soo uplifting

ooooh that was good. nice change from other David stories

whoa! Good job