|Reviews for Bash and Whacker|
| Seriya Silvermist 5/6/13 . chapter 10
Halt's solitary confinement- super clever (and most likely would happen)
The flash back in this chapter was much better. SOOOOOOOOOOO i'm going to say what I always say for this story UPDATE SOON!
| FarmersDaughter 5/6/13 . chapter 10
Aaahhh! Its George! Aaaaaahhhhhh! Ahem, major George fan here :D there should be more stories about him. And Evanlyn im assuming is Cass :)
Yes! Make it a series! Pleeeeaaaasssseeee! ;)
| Seriya Silvermist 5/2/13 . chapter 9
Any way the memory part was kinda confusing but other wise it was a great chappie UPDATE SOON! Another thing I noticed was arald was a bit grim I don't know if you were trying to make him that way because he got kicked out of arluen (I liked how you made arald a bit grim because who would be happy if they all the sudden got kicked out of their feif)
Love the story line!
| FarmersDaughter 4/9/13 . chapter 9
B-but Stephen can't leave! Hes not gonna be bad is he? He will come back and make them all understand it was an accident...right? Plz update! B)
| Savannah Silverstone 4/8/13 . chapter 9
Just had to leave a review o say good job with your story plot wise ! I loved it _ Joel you do more !
| Seriya Silvermist 3/31/13 . chapter 8
This is super good
| FarmersDaughter 3/26/13 . chapter 8
What the heck are Will and Alyss hiding from Thomas!? Update soon cause I neeeeeeeed to know!
Haha! I love Halt when he's crazy! :D
| FarmersDaughter 3/25/13 . chapter 9
Ok, I hope you can update soon though! :)
| Dash99 3/25/13 . chapter 9
Just get it up as soon as you can! I will (try) to wait patiently:)
| Savannah Silverstone 3/18/13 . chapter 8
Omg Thomas whumping ! Haha I'm not mad ! I'm just helping you out and at least you apologized Hana
| FarmersDaughter 3/18/13 . chapter 8
Whoa whoa whoa! What happened?! Did I miss something or was he really stabbed in the gut by his bud? I must've missed something...
| Dash99 3/18/13 . chapter 8
WHAT? A cliff? Please update! pretty please (with coffee on top:))!
| when-i-caught-myself 3/18/13 . chapter 3
Catherine looks to be an alright character so far, and I do agree with the Female Ranger Mary Sue Syndrome (or FRMSS for short). Although I don't remember any occasion where John Flanagan mentions girls not having adequate strength required to draw a bow, so I disagree. (Then again there were the Amazons, who supposedly cut off one of their breasts to shoot better but make of that what you will.)
Good chapter, once again. :)
| when-i-caught-myself 3/18/13 . chapter 2
Good chapter! I liked the part with the "mad stalker who shoots people"... had me laughing for a good five minutes, that one did. :) I also rather like how it's reminiscent of Will's own Choosing. Just the same two issues as the last chapter: word choice and grammar, but otherwise this is good. Keep it up. :)
Also, that's Savannah Silverstone, yes? (J, if you see this, hi!) She's really good with plotlines (I'm beta-ing her story "Danger Zone" and you should read it, the plot is quite riveting). Anyway, this review is getting quite long. Keep writing!
| when-i-caught-myself 3/18/13 . chapter 1
This looks pretty interesting! Stephen seems cool so far... and Thomas Paine? The Patriot journalist, am I right? :D (Yes, I am a history nerd; no, I actually don't mind fictional characters having the names of historical figures. So if you went with Paine I wouldn't have minded... haha!)
Looking good so far, just a bit iffy with some of the grammar/word choices. But the concept of this seems interesting, so I shall continue reading. Good work!