great story

Kairos means "God's time". just thought u would liek to know

hope this is not the end
you said tbc
hope that you will wrte more
please do

hmmmmmmmmmmm...interesting...I know there's not a chance in HELL of you finishing this...but...*Sigh* I dont even LIKE dark angel anymore...but this fic is really good..I hope you think of continuing...its...just...I dont know..its just good..so...yeah...Oh and BTW I found your name while looking for mine on the little search by author thingie...so...thats how I even FOUND this fic...but I'm glad I did...so...Ja ne!

love it

that is good. i think Kia will start to like logan yet, of course, Max'll get jealous, then BAM! Logan'll have to choose who his heart id set for. yuck! i am getting all mushy!

impressive

"Logan’s been searching on the internet to see if there’s something stronger for her seizures. They are so much worse then mine. Hers are like my rough patches. They are so bad, but there’s nothing I can do for her except give her Tryptophan and hold her. Last night it was the first time I’ve cried in years. It was so out of character for me that it was scary. "

-this last line was just wonderful.. it was so sweet and tender, and the fact that max recognizes it's uncharacteristic.. good writing.. however i think it was a bit slow moving.. but looking forward to the next part

I really enjoyed this! The first part as well! I hope you keep writing!

very good! you have to keep writing!

nice one! can't wait till the next!

dark angel rox

Very good, but the character Nathan seems just thrown in.

I really love this story. It's awesome. I need more of it. I really hope that Kairos isn't a spy for Ly er.*g* Hurry and write more of this amazing story.

LOve it, write more!

I think it's a great stroy and that you should write more.