I thought it was funny. No matter how crappy anyone else says it is. Good Job except for the few typos. :) Hope to read another! Go J/C!!

kewl

Strange, but in a good way. This was a very interesting story.

Right...this fic is lacking in just about every field. It moves too fast, no real reflection on what's going on, you call this drama?? And who the hell is Meg?? Its a very superficial attempt. Try adding more to the story, its too simple

This is, no offense... a crappy story!!! It's all written in point form and with no real content. It's as if you've written a bare-bones story with the notes for the main events being your story right now... Story's not bad, but really really poorly written!

Please write more

kewl story, more...More...don't mind me, i'm just crazy. the last part sounded a little like a scene from CODA

This looks awfully familiar. I'm sure I've read something almost identical to this one a year or so ago.

I love Q, and your use of the word lugubrious! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!