|Reviews for Elemental Darkness|
| HiImLuffy 5/18/13 . chapter 8
TROLOLOLOL! nah brasifffy, you dont need any more criticism. You spanked this last to chapters on them BOTTOM. O any one reads this Review. Remember , that Airchi's birthday is the 26th of this month. Remeber to congratz him. Follow him on ask for he;s details personly. Nice story man. Cant w8 for the next one :D! its like extacy!
| Zizima 5/17/13 . chapter 8
I'm reviewing, happy now?
For bugging me so much I'll make the guessing a bit easier. The one he is referring to uses Lighting Blade as one of his few own attacks.
Like I told you before, well done with the chapter and very good job at bringing the Earth Elementals into this.
Don't feel like making an overly-long review so I'll end it with a question, why so secretive with Darman? Are you planning on telling us a bit more about what he can do?
| JJays98 5/16/13 . chapter 8
Quite a good story. Very well done. Kept me very interested for the day. Good work. But may I ask, will you be involving dark spyro or 'Terror of the skies' in later chapters, or something evil happens to them. Sorry, I'm a bit crazy about dark spyro.
It would be amazing if when all the 'elementals' awake, they had 1 more elemental to wake up, which is spyro(sorry but I had to) and they plan to capture him, and 'properly' wake him up by taking him to the well of souls.I think that would add quite an epic twist or plot to this areay epic this isn't my story and it would very rude of me to 'control' or dictate your story and how it ends.(I was ony an idea)
Anyway back to reviewing the story(properly)- I liked the idea at the beginning, where the wars over, but not everyone knows it is, allowing you to add hostility and depth to the story about other characters, which is quite genius, because it brings in a new perspective of the spyro fanfic stories which other stories(or very few) don't, which really stand out to me. And I like this idea of a new threat rising, ready to cause chaos, because it allows you to bring action into the story, which stops it from being boring. So you really have pieced it out quite well.
Only improvement I would say, is, introduce your characters gradually throughout the story,because I found in chapter 3,4(I can't remember) you introduced about 3-4 characters at one time, then bringing in1 or 2 more. And for me, I feel (unless its written quite well) your introducing too many characters to the scene. Just add them in gradually and build up their background and personalities.
Sorry for my ranting an long review, but its my way of explaining, as some people may know.
Oh, an one more note;don't copy out this review into your notes if you 's too long an you will be spammed with flames if you do so, so I suggest you don't, because the last I want to happen to this epic story is being rated and considered badly by other viewers.
Thanks for the awesome story
| RougeMelodyAngel 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Hi sooooooo glad to hear that your doing beter!
Love this chapter! How they had to fight to determine their classes; was surprised to find that Spyro didn't even make it pass round 2 ...
And then there's Quake, something's telling me he's going to be another problem for poor Cynder_
Can't keep myself from laughing every time that Amber tries to kill Darmen, she's even more vicious than Ember towards Flame; are you sure they aren't related?!
Anyways I'm sure that from here on the story will just come to life as the academy is finally open and Flake/Glacia is released from her prison...
| wolfartist117 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Aww poor spyro in the arena. Would love to see him on a rampage a bit with that later.
Not to mention everyone's getting a bad feeling, can't wait to sure where that goes ; )
| MurasakiKuroAkai 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Glad to hear you're getting better. But you should still take it easy and give yourself time to recover.
On a somewhat related side note: Yay! Early new chapter! Orientation went rather well. In regards to Amber's latest electrocution attempt (at the end), that definitely has got to both hurt and stink (literally). Looking forward to the next chapter, and get well soon! :-)
Anime character reference guess: The only anime I know that includes lighting is Laxus and Orga from "Fairy Tail" and Zatch and Zeno from "Zatch Bell"
| Phoenix of Decay 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Again I'm mentioned. Are you trying to get me in the hospital with you?! Anywho, just make sure Moneybags doesn't get wind of Amber trying to kill Darman, he'd charge a fortune for people to watch it.
Can we go 4 chapters in a row on mentions? I hope so :)
-Phoenix of Decay
P.S. Hi :)
| coincidencless 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Given that I have never, nor am I likely to ever, watch anime, I have NO idea. Meh.
Oh my, things are about to get very, very interesting, with two groups of elementals. And I feel the Earth elementals will be just a teensy, tiny bit tougher than the Ice ones.
I feel Darman did something awful with his element. His element /is/ void, The absence of energy, absence of matter. Did he drain the energy in someone's brain by accident? Annihilate their heart? Scary to think of.
And of course, go Flake! I really like how you're making the 'bad' guys not all that bad. Yet.
Yay for ongoing survival!
| darman700 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Hey bro and another great chapter amazing as all the rest, and come on can't I learn just a little bit about Darman's power?
Can't wait to see the elementals in accion I hope it's soon...
Keep at it bro and hope you get up and running real soon...
My guess to the anime character is Misaka Mikoto :)
| Unit Omicron 5/14/13 . chapter 8
Your creative ways that you use to discouraging flaming at the end of the chapters always makes me laugh. XD Two elementals down, two to go. I hope the Guardians do something about it before all four are awakened! Porr spyro...he's still recovering...hope it's not too late by the time the elementals make their move. Great cliffhanger, once again! Looking forward to really getting to know the Earth Elementals. XD Another great chapter, once again! I'm looking forward to the next one!
Best Regards. -UO
PS-Thanks again for saying yes to my request to BR my own FanFiction! :D
| Fan-Deca-girl 5/14/13 . chapter 8
It's still a great story, you should keep going with it when you can. People like you should win awards for stories like this!
| RougeMelodyAngel 5/7/13 . chapter 7
I love this story!
Can't wait to see how Amber truly comes to terms with the new and improved Cynder from how she thought Cynder was, and I'm so very pleased to see that every one is giving her the 2nd chance she deserves and forgiving not her actions that she did having been controled, but rather as a fellow dragon.
| XxTheSomeonexX 5/7/13 . chapter 7
Wow, sorry to hear that happened to you. Im surprised that you care enough to update this when something that bad just happened to you. Major props. And thanks for another mention :D .
| Unit Omicron 5/6/13 . chapter 7
Great story so far! I love the character development in this one. Most of the other Spyro x Cynder stories on here start out IMMEDIATELY with them being together. Spyro being oblivious is a nice touch, and adds a feeling for wanting to read on. also, the quick references to the Elementals' trek across the ocean adds for a suspense feeling as well, as well as dramatic irony. VERY well written. On a side note, I hope you are recovering well from your injury. Suffering through a traumatic experience like that must have been horrific. I wish you the best in your recovery! Best regards. -UO
| wolfartist117 5/6/13 . chapter 7
Been dying to see spyros reaction nice work ; )