| Reviews for With Love |
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blackdawn314 3/23/13 . chapter 2Awwww sooooo cute XD, I loved every bit of it :D u r an amazing writer :DD |
Guest 3/22/13 . chapter 2 Sweet! What a lovely present! |
Alexei liqueur 3/22/13 . chapter 2You are almost cause me a heart attack...I mean literally,I waited the second part since you Posted the first and every time I check my mail I can not find anything... Today and suddenly here's is, moved directly to the page and started reading (Im a slow and imagined reader) for this when I arrived to the part ( "Well, who gives a used present to someone, anyway?) i completely lost it i Started Laugh hysterically (I'm not crazy,just do this whenever im excited) to the extent that my throat was dry and I needed a glass of water (Have you ever tried to drink water and you smile like Joker!?, that t is very difficult).I took a few minutes to restore my breath and completed the story, it may be silly, but it ten in the morning and Im listening to( Jason Mraz,The Woman I Love) and I feel that no one can take my Smile today so ... thank you to please my day Note: Virgin Itachi is killing me , I almost had a nose bleed |
Tonni G. dru 3/22/13 . chapter 2ahh pure unadultrated bliss i feel so mushy, awesome lemon meti i could almost weep. U and ur mad insane obsession with purple, yea...itachi the purple blushing bride cute. Loved the Lemon. Itachi ish funny dude u r straddling a huge drooling man with a pert ass! Whatdo ya expect! His brain is on hibernate! The innocence was so attractive. |
Xianthra17 3/21/13 . chapter 2*coughing, breathing hard, cheeks red, fingers tangled over her hair - thus covering the face xD* The wait for this was WORTH every second of it! I survived until the end! Damn! (pardon my language) What I would give to have a present like that and have it unwrapped the same exact way! Meti... I just died and have gone to this wonderful little place called heaven (but was kicked out as soon as they realized I haven't reviewed this yet... so I am back xD). How many times must I tell you that I adore you? What can I do to show you how wonderful you are in my eyes? The choice of words... the flow of the scene... Meti, they are perfect! I adore looong lemons... double that adoration since it was written by you... The hair-pulling/tugging... fingers running through the hair... the way it was mentioned all over this wonderful piece... that killed me! Kudos to you sweetie... :) My mind is still numb... the goosebumps haven't left me yet... I don't know if I can still sleep properly after reading this... Before I go... You've got a very happy and contented Hidan-convert here... :) |
Erikkun 3/21/13 . chapter 2333333 HidaIta forever! |
Yaoi-lover413 3/21/13 . chapter 2Long lemon is nice ;3 |
FluffyIsEmo 3/21/13 . chapter 2This was so worth the wait for the second chapter :3. Loved it metti! Keep up the good work |
loverofakatsuki 3/21/13 . chapter 2You probably are getting tired of me saying this but...PERFECTION! Such a sexy steamy chapter I just can't get enough and blushing the whole time XD HAPPY BIRTHDAY HIDAN! WE LOVE YOUR SEXY ASS! |
loverofakatsuki 3/21/13 . chapter 1LMAO with Hidan's reactions to everything...well...it IS Hidan after all. Loved it all and can't wait for next chapter ;p I actually though I reviewed this but I didn't...I'm either getting slack or not pushing the send button good enough lol |
Yaoi-lover413 3/20/13 . chapter 1I love it :D Oh, and the "found the weasel" part totally cracked me up xD awesome xD Me want next part ;3 |
kiba1988 3/19/13 . chapter 1Pleassssse! Update soooon! I love it :D :D :D |
MikoUchiha 3/15/13 . chapter 1Well this looks interesting. Can't wait for part2 |
ZexyKiba 3/13/13 . chapter 1Love the story so far. I can't wait to see what Itachi's present is (*︶*) Something tells me Hidan is going to love! Keep up the amazing work! |
Xianthra17 3/11/13 . chapter 1*fans face vigorously, trying to remove the blush away* This is my first review, after reading your masterpieces silently I knew I couldn't just leave it that way. You have an amazing talent Meti dear. You write things in such rare simplicity that they explode with emotions that everyone can relate. I honestly wasn't a fan of Hidan. But after reading your craft, I got converted. I now believe that if Itachi can't be with Sasuke, then Hidan would be the perfect choice. This story, made me smile, blush and feel all tingly all over. I feel like a high-school girl experiencing her first major crush. The flow of the story was perfect for it's theme. Itachi acting shy is cuteness overload. I just didn't agree of Sasori's sleeping habits. Maybe on the next chapter if he is still there, he can be more awake? I can't wait for the next chapter... :-* |