|Reviews for To Wish Upon a Falling Star|
| Seriya Silvermist 4/8/13 . chapter 4
Oh man genovesians *raises eyebrow* I think
| Savannah Silverstone 4/7/13 . chapter 4
Naaa it's okay ! My titles get pretty random too! Crowley seemed fine... My main problem is your lack of page breaks... It kinda makes it hard to read . Update soon !
| Seriya Silvermist 4/1/13 . chapter 3
This seems interesting GILAN! Yes this fandom needs more of him by the way gilan is spelled with 1 l
| Savannah Silverstone 3/20/13 . chapter 3
Hmmm The chapter needs more descriptions and there's a new paragraph every time someone new talks so... I think that's what you need to work on. So far the characters were kinda in character, you just need to fix a few things here and , It'd be great if you update!
| Hannah 3/15/13 . chapter 2
Please update its really good
| Dash99 3/17/13 . chapter 2
I know I am being technical but when you are writing from a third person point of view you don't have to say pov, just so you know. I can't wait to see where this is headed!
| Savannah Silverstone 3/16/13 . chapter 2
Hmm you need a bit work in narration and fixing some of your spelling but good job so far just make longer chapters too
| Dash99 3/10/13 . chapter 1
What's going to happen? Curiosity is going to kill me so update! (Please:))
| Savannah Silverstone 3/10/13 . chapter 1
It was too short... That's my only issue. I think it could have been longer and a lot more could've happened so the reader will be able to know at least a bit of what to expect in the later chapters... Please update though!