|Reviews for When Legends were Young|
| tuckeyhunger99 5/20/13 . chapter 12
Good chapter:-) but i really am getting excited to find out about shifu past
| Babycakes22 5/20/13 . chapter 12
hahaha fengy that never gets old bless her ;) aww ime gutted this fic will be over soon but... bring on the "movie" ;) loved this chappie it was nice to read about one of the five learning something new and new characters :) plz update soon :D
| Rabenkopf 4/29/13 . chapter 11
"Yun immediately realized that he hadn't talked to Yun in a long time..." need I tell more ;-)
honestly...somehow you use Yun's name a little bit too often ;-) a bit variety would have been better :-)
"Looking back as well, Yun saw that there were also some people behind them. Yun of course grew somewhat suspicious right away. Yun immediately told Xiao to climb onto the carriage and Yun himself started walking closer to it."
Four times Yun in one phrase ;-)
Wings of Justice...Wings of Justice! The technique of Crane :D Will Yun soon also say Ka Ka :D
He Guo Village? do I know it?
What?! A Noodle soup better than Mr. Pings?! Yun seems to be under the influence of feeling too much like a hero thinking that ;-)
A Rooster is going on Vacation ;-P to summarize this chapter :D
Till next time :-)
| tuckeyhunger99 4/28/13 . chapter 11
Good chapter :-)
| Rabenkopf 4/19/13 . chapter 10
nice list of ages :-)
eh isn't it in total six children? two older sisters, one older brother, Ai Long, one younger brother and one younger sister?
"And he said that it reminded him of someone?" Ai Long asked. Fenghuang nodded. "Maybe he knew the guy who sold you this?"
Fenghuang shrugged. "Or maybe he knew someone who owned a similar medallion?"
The two girls continued for a while without talking. The thing with the medallion still appeared strange to Fenghuang and she couldn't help but wonder what connection Shifu might have had to it – or whatever else the case was.
"Wait, do you think that maybe Shifu knew the guy who sold you this?" Ai Long asked as they continued down the stairs. "After all, he said that it reminded him of someone – the medallion, I mean."
- don't you repeat yourself here?
nice philosophical excursion here :D Fenghy - this nickname will never leave from now on :D now only Shi-Shi needs to accept his :D
| Babycakes22 4/18/13 . chapter 10
aww loved that chappy so cute! ;) waw simple question simple answer didnt see that coming lolz ;) hmm i wonder if weal here more of shifus past coming up in the future... plz update soon :D
| tuckeyhunger99 4/18/13 . chapter 10
Aww that was so cute i loved it. I really want to read when shifu tells them about the medallion
| tuckeyhunger99 4/16/13 . chapter 9
When will shifu tell fengheng about the medallion plz tel us
| Babycakes22 4/16/13 . chapter 9
hmm so thats how shifu felt a chill last time memories much awww poor feunghuang plz update soon :D
| Rabenkopf 4/12/13 . chapter 9
a past mixing chapter...hmm let's see if there will be consequences ;-)
""Don't worry, I will," Fenghuang said, forcing up a smile. Jufeng suddenly caught her in a deep hug. At first she was surprised, but eventually she hugged him back." - reminds of Po and Tigress hugging, don't you think? ;-)
"Friendship… Had that really been all there was the whole time? At some points, Fenghuang had her doubts, yet why would the doubt even be there? Jufeng was her friend, now he was married, she was a part of the Furious Five and that was it. But still… watching Jufeng and Meihua together, made Fenghuang have her doubts." - now you understand TiPo :D
for being young Shifu behaves like his older self already :D
""Guys, what are you doing here?" Fenghuang asked." - I think this question was not needed :-) After all Shifu was there moments ago and the village is not so big ;-)
"why hadn't she just asked for help?" - yeah why? :D
"That was unexpected," - the right words o.O
When will Shifu reveal the thing with the medallion?
All in all the chapter was less confusing than the other and the most important spots of the plot were connected :-) Although I ask myself if this was the last meeting between Jufeng and Fenghuang...after all he lives in the Valley now ;-)
till next time :-)
| Rabenkopf 4/3/13 . chapter 8
not so good idea starting a chapter with "you will not like it, so don't read it..." ;-P you are manipulating your readers in a direction you don't want to see :D
""Oh, it's just you," Fenghuang said, sounding like there was no point to her life anymore." - nice :D
what an accident...Fenghy thinks about Jufeng and soon his medaillion appears...
somehow the part after the fight is quite confusing, when you ask me...
so next chapter the truth comes out, what? :-)
let's see how you finish this. Till next time :-)
| Babycakes22 4/2/13 . chapter 8
oosh things just got interesting! hmm whats up with the chills form shifu touching the medallion hmm more secrets will be revealed soon by the looks of things cant wait till the real jufeung arrives! plz update soon :D
| Babycakes22 3/21/13 . chapter 7
pmsl! aww bless run feunhuang well in your case fly! ;) ime glad they resolve there differences b4 it was too late plz update soon :D
| Rabenkopf 3/21/13 . chapter 7
ah yes Shifu-Lumang-argueing Level 2 :D
The Big O - nice shortcut :D Nice Alpha Dog quarrel :D Tian has a nice job :D
"But I realized that you were right. Why? Because it doesn't matter how many foes I face on my own; it'd be far more honorable to say that I saved you guys as well." - dull laughter ;-)
""Let's go, Panda!"" - That's irony what :D
this signature moves get funny somehow ;-P
Fenghuang is a telltale :D
This Baoda reminds me of Fung ;-) doesn't learn to do other things than attacking the Valley of Peace even when he has broke out of the prison hours ago :D
Will there come also other villians?
Till next time :-)
| Babycakes22 3/18/13 . chapter 6
aww bless you thanku ;) really enjoyed this chappie so glad feunghuang came back! and proved her dad wrong showem girl! cant wait for the next one plz update soon :D