Hey, I am new to u sloop, here goes. I think that the last chapters were very nice.

i mite be able to help you. me and my friend are pretty good at drawing dragons. i drew my character. i mite post my story soon. anyway so far i like how your story is going. now im lingering to see what happens next!

Personally, I don't read lemons as such. I skim them, but that's about it. If you were going to include one or some, make it less of detail. If there is another thing I hate, it's a detailed lemon.

Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

That would suck if Amphars died after all that I hope you explain how Grace got her healing abilities because I'm pretty interested in that.

Excellent chapter, like always. I like Grace's new power. Very handy. And to answer the question of Ember and Bandit's child, it would be a draconic armadillo of course!

I hope that Amphars doesn't die, after doing all that to save Grace. I also hope Cynder and Ember can save Spyro in time.

Yes I am a Fan of Bandit and Ember as a couples and Bandit is my favourite Spyro character of them all. If they did have a child it would a stoneback (half dragon half armadillo).

That was a pretty good chapter. It was creative and very detailed. I will be looking forward to read more

LORD OF MERCY! NO EFFING LEMONS ARE YOU CRAZY !?

If your going to do a lemon you don't have make the sex in them very detailed. For example, "Bandit looked into Ember's eyes filled with love as was she, they than kissed each other. They stayed like that for a while, both in love and knowing they would be together. When they part they look into each others eyes once more. 'I love you Ember' said Bandit loveingly, 'I love you too Bandit.' said Ember with the same love as his. 'Are you ready for this?' said Bandit with concerned. 'Yes Bandit,' said Ember as she turned around 'just be gentle.' 'I will.' said Bandit as he got ready. Than the two showed how much love, how much passion they had for each other. Bandit loves Ember with all his heart and was willing to show this love as she was willing to do the same for him. when they were done, they laid together in each other embrace and looked into each others eyes once more that night. 'I love you Ember, to the ends of time.' Bandit said as he loveingly kissed her. 'To the ends of time.' Said Ember as she return the kiss." If you do a lemon like that you don't necessarily have to raise the rating

If you decide to have "lemons", you could always just post it as its own chapter or even its own story. Personally, I don't like reading them and will skip the whole section about it, so either way, it doesn't matter to me.

First off I thing that if you want to add a lemon to this story do it as a different story. Like still have the same chapter but don't attach that chapter to this story but put it as a new story if that makes sense.

Now for the chapter. I have only one question. Why aren't the guardian's going with cynder or amphar? Other then that I found a couple of sentences that have missing words. All and all I would have to say that this story is still very interesting and I will be looking forward to read more.

Ok since you want my opinion about lemons, here you go:

What you want to do with the story is up to you. If you want to throw a lemon or two I don't care. If it flows well with the story then go ahead.

I hope they save Spyro.

this is an amazing story, r spyro and cynder going 2 mate. i'm on the edge of my seat