| Reviews for The Trouble With Akbadain |
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Spottedmask77 5/7/13 . chapter 7UPDATE SOON I'M BEGGING YOU! |
Spottedmask77 5/7/13 . chapter 5ZEPPELINS! |
Spottedmask77 5/7/13 . chapter 2Oh my gosh. Definetly a fav. |
Spottedmask77 5/7/13 . chapter 1I really love your story so far! |
Guest 5/5/13 . chapter 7 This is brilliant! I cant wait until the next chapter! |
Emerald Enchantress 3/31/13 . chapter 7Aargh... everyone's trying to kill me with Dessy's backstory... first my sister (yes, Noe's my sister), and now you! D: Poor Descole... doesn't help that I just happened to be listening to Surely Someday while reading this. Update soon! :D Em |
NeverOnEarth 3/30/13 . chapter 7Ack! I'm going to cry! Dessy poisoned? NOOOOOOOOOO! XD I seriously want to kill Reinel right now. Hurry up Raymond! Dessy needs you! HE'S DYING! Happy Easter! Peace is a blessing, so treasure it always! Noe. |
Abitat Eco 3/30/13 . chapter 7Happy Easter to you tooo! (Hands virtual easter egg) sooo...that was a great and suspence filled chapter. Nooo! Dessy's poisoned...and Raymond had better get his master and get out of there! XD XD XD YOU CAN DO IT GUYS! XD XD Great job! Good luck with the next chapter and update soon! I want to see what happens next with our dear dear Dessy! XD XD XD XD |
The Mocking J 3/30/13 . chapter 7Another great chapter :) I didn't realize he'd been poisoned- poor Descole! Those were some sad memories back there :'( |
randomgirl40 3/30/13 . chapter 7Happy Easter miss descole! Congrats on the chapter! But why did you have to poison the beloved Descole! Why?! Waaaa! Waiting for the new game is torture enough! Now you've poisoned my favourite villain apart from Clive! What is the world coming to? |
Abitat Eco 3/27/13 . chapter 6ooooh! I LOVE how Dessy managed to get out of that one! Lol! XD XD XD XD XD Come on Raymond! Your master is waiting! Great job! Keep up the awesome work! XD XD XD XD |
The Mocking J 3/27/13 . chapter 6Ok, ok I'm leaving a review, no need to blackmail us, Descole! Huh. I never noticed before but Descole isn't scared of heights at all- standing on top of huge robots, jumping off ledges... He's either really brave or just crazy. Uh oh, Reinel got some of Descole's blood there... I guess this explains where Raymond learned how to fly a blimp that transforms into a plane... |
NeverOnEarth 3/27/13 . chapter 6RUN DESSY RUN! Great new chappie! Update soon! Peace is a blessing, so treasure it always! Noe. |
Emerald Enchantress 3/27/13 . chapter 6Well, I probably should have reviewed this before now, being the mad Descole fanatic that I am... please don't stab me, Dessy! First of all, can I say congratulations to you for writing this, because I've been looking for something that involves Descole and Reinel and no slash or pairings or whatever for a very long time. And this place needs more Descole stuff! Much more Descole stuff! And I'm also pleased to know that I'm not the only person who calls Reinel "Reinel" and not Bronev because I find it impossible to use his first name... I felt like a loner. :'D Anyway, moving on... I really like how Dessy's got Azran blood in this, which makes a lot of sense... and Reinel's so evil! I really want to kill him right now... really badly... And I hope Dessy gets away! I have faith in him! And I like how Raymond's in this, because he's amazing and often overlooked, I find. And you've managed to keep them all in character really well too... and it's really intense... and it's about Dessy... and it's one of the best things that has been posted on this site for a long time, so update soon! Em |
NeverOnEarth 3/25/13 . chapter 5Great job! We seriously do need more Dessy Fics round here! Peace is a blessing, so treasure it always! Noe. |