You HAVE to continue!

You'd better not hurt Gilan...:) great job!

for # 20: i'd scream & wonder what the rubber ducky is for...what are they doing to/with that poor duck!?

OMG!

do as i do & have someone beta the stories instead of relying soulfully on auto correct. it helps.
you get less reviews like this one.

demigod is one word. no hyphen, just demigod. seriously, you need a beta. i recommend Rassia, she's great at it.

in the books, Ranger is capitalized. i think Flanagan intended it to be a proper noun. if you don't believe me, i've got ruins of Goran in front of me. check one of your books if you wish.

you're not supposed to have spaces before your periods.

Intriguing! Can't wait for the proper update :)

The second one has me curious! Alas, I'll review here and make you work harder for your 100 reviews ;)

Althing Attack!
Alliteration Army!
Yep. Adriel Althing is attacking Will, and the inly thing I can notice is, "No way! His name is an alliteration!"

You need to make Alyss go all super ninja to protect Will!

Oh my goodness!the scene about Cass totally surprised me! Wasn't expecting that at all!

sorry but they didn't have rucksacks in the middle ages which is kindda when the books were set anyway i like this chapter i wasn't all that clear about it all so you know... anyway i agree autocorrect is a trouble some thing and way i am very hyper soif this review does not make sence there you have it

You really need to continue DZ, you know that, right? :)

Alright. I have to read Danger Zone now.