You have to update this! I need to know how it ends! You can't just leave it hanging like that! It's cruel and unusual punishment! Please update this! For me? Please?!?!

Naa, why aren't you updating this great fanfic? And if, please don't let Nuriko die! It's terrible enough that he tried to kill himself. And if you ever update, please let it be a happy ending, I beg to you! *lol*

you better update this fabulous story this instant

Wow. this is an awsomes story-line, keep writting, i wanna see the next chapter ^_^

Um, excuse me? *raises an eyebrow* What is this? How could you have possibly written these four chapters? I mean, how could you have possibly written ONLY four chapters? You have a lot to answer for, young lady! *looks stern*

Just kidding. I'm in an odd mood. But you must write. I won't specifically say to write more of this, just write. Write SOMETHING. Please. I will DIE without your writing! DIE! DIE! *blinks* But then maybe someone will do kaisei no mahou! And then I'll come back to life and realize that I do have something to live for because you will've updated by then! OR maybe I'll come back and be miserable because you haven't written anything yet! Then I'll take the Nuriko way of doing things and DIE DIE DIE and it will be ALL YOUR FAULT!

Just kidding again. *sweatdrop* Write, please?

wow. amazing story! i'm going on a ryuen-reading-rampage, right now, so i'm just scrolling down your list reading almost everything... ^^; anyway, your fics are amazing! this one is, too, amazing well written. you make nuriko's feelings seem very realistic, somehow. some suicide fics just feel *fake*, and can't convince the reader of the person's feelings.
anyway, please write more!
(P.S. miaka's eyes were ancient in his face? that's the second last line, and it's a little weird. isn't his face miaka's? so shouldn't it be 'his eyes were ancient in miaka's face' or something? just checking.)

Wow! this is just as good as Risen! If only I could write like that! you're such a great author!


Ja Ne,
the local manslayer

I liketh, I do :D Please keep it up

Oh. oh dear.

More! I would absolutely love more of this fic. I'm completely elated that Hotohori and Nuriko have a chance at a sequel. The prequel to this fic wrapped up a little too neatly for my taste; this gives them a chance to angst and grieve, something quite dear to my heart. ^__^

Can't wait to see more!

Wow, nuriko has some big issues. Great descriptions of his thoughts when he was being all suicidal. Very realistic. Once again this story is incredibly well written. Is it over? I hope not. I want more! MORE!!!

I've read both And Then It Changes and Risen, and loved the two (three) of them! You really make us put ourselves in the character (Nuriko's, especially)shoes. Very well done! Oh, and love the way you write Tasuki. -^.^- Please, update as soon as possible! Oh, and you're already one of my favorite authors. -^.~- Nuriko & Hotohori forever!!!!!!

OMG! This so so wonderful! My eyes started to water in "Risin", but I now feel heartache for Nuriko. Angst is good, hee hee.

You have to write more!! As a matter of fact, you really need to write more on many of your fics!! You're such a talented author and this fanfic is so good and interesting (eh gomen for lack of a more creative commentary, but I am in serious need of sleep lol) err yeah so write more!!!

Wh00t. Continuerama. oo; Godz that sounded BEYOND corny. Anyway, Continue. CONTINUE.. or I will stalk your e-mail and flood you w/ chain-letters? Of course I will. Moo-ha. Hoto/Nuri rules, therefore you rock this WORLD. *Nods a bit* Bwee.

**sniffffffffffle** aaah, poor Hotohori-sama and Nurikoooooo!!!! It's so saaaad!!! A-a-a-and, now he has to make sure Nuriko doesn't kill himself!!!! It's a bloody suicide watch at the palace!!! That's just terrible!!!!!