WAIT! HOW THE HELL DID ROSHI DIE?! HE'S FREAKING IMMORTAL!

this is the second time I've read this story through and I enjoyed it just as much the second time round!

I appreciate the struggles of writing, I've been working on the prologue of my own story for months now, but I echo the sentiment that I hope you update soon... Patience is not a virtue of mine :)

Adding you to alerts, as Im sure you guessed.

Thank you

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Goku doesn't die.



He just DOESN'T. Its rule one of DBZ...

This is an wicked story I hope that you update soon. One thing I don't like how you made Gohan want to study in stead of training. One last thing Please Please Please Update Soon

You really need to finish your Evangelion Story with only the epilogue left it is a pretty ** thing to do to people who want a conculsion I hope Rei comes back and can have children.

I'm really loving this story and hoping you will continue with it. The in-depth relationships between the paired characters are the things mostly grabbing my attention. I also think the ideas you've come up with are very original and interesting. I particularly liked the way all the Z warriors banded together to finish off Cell. In all honesty, a much more believable and acceptable circumstance then Gohan being so ridiculously strong at such a young age.

Please continue as soon as possible as I'd love to read more of this intriguing story.

Also, if you need any help getting the story out faster (someone to beta read, or bounce ideas off of) Please let me know and I'll do whatever I can. This is the best DBZ story I've found in a long time and I don't want to see it die, especially since it's been going for around 7 years.

Keep up the great work,
--Radgar

What stinks is that Gohan wasn't the one to destroy Cell. What if Gohan first decided to head off into space after he woke up for personal reflection and a chance to train. When he returns, he secretly goes into the Hyperbolic Time Chamber for more training. All of it in the hopes of moving forward.

Interesting thing would be if Bardock visited Gohan in his sleep to remind him what means to be a saiyan.

These are only suggestions, so please continue.

You gotta write some more Lucy, I'm dying.. Very slowly since there's nothing wrong with and I'm young. But I've probably only got another good 70 or 80 years in me so please hurry! =P

I'm so happy you decided to update this! I started reading almost 5 years ago and thought that you had given up on this story!! This is by far, one of the best DBZ fanfics I've read and I'm happy that the story hasn't ended!...without an ending lol

I had long since given up hope of this story ever being continued. Glad to see that your back.

wtf man. i hate how gohan never trained. its **. hes a ** amazing charecter. i dont c why you ruined him like that. get him back in the story

Brilliant having Gregory give his life to bring back Vegeta and the two super saiyan assault was good stuff.

great storry

well i finally read the 40th chapter its a great story but some are glad that gohan is being prorated in a different way its cool and all but ** man i still cant believe he passed out like i alittle wuss againts cell you made him so weak and defenseless and people have to constantly die for him w ake up the boy already let him see the bloody light and for heaven sakes make him train oh and plz dont make him so naive it sucks the way he S.L.O.W when it came to girls i really love your story keep writting but plz and i begging like i asked before make gohan look like something instead of nothing like he has all through the fanfic

Sigh this is a great story but goodness gracious gohan is my favorite character its bad enough the original writer turned him into a ** but good god let the boy even a little i am begging u plz he behaving like a i cant find a word right now