I like this AU you've made, but I'm sad that it hasn't been completed and hasn't been updated in a while. I hope you come back to it eventually!

good story until now...

but this dampner idea is pretty illogical...

this new saiyans arc is totally screwed up...

It was a great story (Was because you most likely put up another chapter.) The only thing I didn't like was that Gohan didn't fight ,of course, it was a great twist when I found out.

Great story too bad it will probably never be finished since it hasn't been updated in 3 years.

I read this whole darn story for nothing.. your not gonna finish are you... :(

Interesting@!

I absolutely love this story even if it hasn't been updated in 2 years, I will be patiently waiting for chapter 41. This is one of the original, classic fics in the DBZ archive of FF. Net

You know, I really miss this story... Sure it's been two or three years at the most, but I still remember reading and falling in love with it. Please you can't abandon it here, I'd hail this as one of the BEST stories if not the best story on the site. I hope that one day you might resume this wonderful piece of art.

I will tell you honestly, this review is a bit late, but in my honest opinion this fanfic of yours is a piece of crap, the way you made Gohan out to be pisses me off greatly, and the general idea I got from this fanfic is that it WAS NEVER ABOUT GOHAN OR VIDEL, only about GOKU/VEGETA/PICCOLO/KRILLIN.

One thing I hate the most is when author's like you put their fanfics in the incorrect character selection.

My honest opinion of this story on the scale of 0 to 10, is

0 out 10.

Like most reviewers before me, (not the ones who stated on gohans character being the way it is portrayed in this fic), are brainless imbeciles who would think this annoying upstart music artist Justin Bieber or whatever his name is any good, I think his and any pop music is trash.

Eh, just for the record, in the time after Piccolo and Goku destroyed the arena, there was no Tournament until the one Mr. Satan won. Then after that, Cell kinda happened and they delayed ressurrecting it again.

Wow. So Bulma's a whore. Figures.

Great story that has a nice twist on the original plot. I can see that you updated after a 5 year absence so I hope you come back with another chapter soon.

WAIT! HOW THE HELL DID ROSHI DIE? HE'S FREAKING IMMORTAL!

this is the second time I've read this story through and I enjoyed it just as much the second time round!

I appreciate the struggles of writing, I've been working on the prologue of my own story for months now, but I echo the sentiment that I hope you update soon... Patience is not a virtue of mine :)

Adding you to alerts, as Im sure you guessed.

Thank you

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Goku doesn't die.

He just DOESN'T. Its rule one of DBZ...