i realy like this chapter and the name of Videls attack fit in with the family name thing. i look forward to the next chapter. Ja-ne (_)

fantastic fic cant wate to read more

Great new chapters. I am really enjoying the story. Keep writing.

oh 1 more thing did da Z warriors destroy da docterds lab?

Hey will cell return? i mean he could of found some way to return? becuz in da show he does but its ur story so its all sweet but still i think he should return to finish some of da guys off as perfect cell. then sum miracle happens plus... no one reach super saiyan 2 yet?

This was beyond update soon.

Is Gohan gonna be okay? Don't kill him. WAH! Update, please, but don't kill him. *continues to cry*

Very nicely done none of the character were left out and Krillin got a chance to shine.

Very very well done ending, hurry with the update

Wo! I was expected it to be Pesa, but that was even better! Rock on!

wow that was good. i kind of feel sorry for gohan cause he didn't get to do much, but he did bring videl and she helped finish him off. can't wait for hte next update. talk to you then.

I like the story, I really do. But can you please make gohan stronger.

I hated it when the series made him a bitch. Please don't do the same thing.

PEACE

hey there! awesomeness! that was nothing what i had expected it to be! poor gohan though, i hope he snaps out of it. you're awesome at this! pleaz update soon, i'm itching to find out what happens next! later!

ViG

yeah that was good, but Id like to see another chapter hurry hurry!

So you introduced the Golden Ape a little earlier than the show did, 's update soon.