Man this is good, keep it up

Why'd you make Cell so overly powerful and when are you going to make Gohan start training again?

Man this is geting interesting

come on you coulda brought goten out you just would've had to say something like "because her mate was missing she was so grief stricken and lacking of the correct chemicals make the baby's development go correctly so it's growth was negatively influenced by the DNA mix and instead of the speed up from the two seperate species it gained the slower attributes of both birthing cycles and came slowly instead of quickly like he was supposed to" or something also i'm upset you didn't activate sixteen:( (sits in a corner and pout./)

shien couldn't have competed because he was dead during your 25th tournament because shien was (and i just recently learned this) Kami's human form so with Piccolo dead during that time then so was shien.

lol... i didnt catch that the first time around... all the author reference (Gene Phillips; Ralph Waldo Emerson etc)

Holy crap! Talk about pleasent surprises!

Not only is the story back, but it was great! Krillin was written perfectly and Videl was badass and cute at the same time. The only downside I can think of was that it took my a few minutes to remember some of the plot points. ;;

Again, glad to see the story and it's writer have returned! Thank you Lucy!

Sweet! It's really great to see that you're back. I was getting worried for a while there. Loved the chapter, especially the Hercule moments. He seemed pretty in-character to me, which I don't think is nearly common enough. I haven't been reading as much in the DBZ fandom lately, but most of the time when I read it before, he was either played off as:

1. A complete and total idiot with basically no grasp on reality whatsoever.

2. Some kind of child-beating, cruelly self-absorbed jerk.

Of course, he really is self-absorbed and oblivious, but not to the extremes that most people make him. So it's nice to see him more like...Well, him.

Anyway, aside from that, not too much else to say. Just psyched to see that you're back, and that even after the absence, the chapter seems just as good as the ones before.

OMG Beast chan is back. This must mean that third Impact is starting, oh wait, wrong universe. Anyway, I can't tell you how glad I am to see that you are updating.

Man this is good so far, I need to read more later, keep up the good work

OH MY GOD! I CANT BELIEVE THIS... I JUST MARKED THIS STORY AS DISCONTINUED BUT YOUR ACTUALLY CONTINUEING IT... YOU DONT KNOW HOW HAPPY I AM...IVE BEEN WITH THIS STORY SINCE THERE WERE ONLY 4 CHAPTERS AND YOU UPLOADED A CHAPTER A DAY! IT WAS CHRISTMAS EARLY SEEING AN UPDAT ON MY FAVORITES LISTSS (pf cpurse ima have to start from the start to remember all the details...but hell id love to)

YES! It's been two long painful years, as I started reading from this site about two years ago, but the story is alive again. I had to read the last few chapters again to remind myself what was going on. Anyway that was great, everything flowed well, no really noticeable mistakes and 18 and Krillin now understands what the other feels.

I really like what you have done to Gohan as well, it's something not done by anyone else, I hope, and it really helps make this story stand out from any other DB story.

Read ya later.

FLUFFYTIGER

HOLY SH*T! YOU UPDATED! Oh my GOD! Is the world ending?

Seriously, it has been an eternity and then some since you last updated! I was convinced that you'd finally ended it! THANK YOU FOR PROVING MY WRONG!

I REALLY enjoyed this chapter. 18 and Krillen's relationship is definitely evolving, slowly but surely. And it's always fun to see Krillen getting mocked mercilessly isn't it? Peasa is missing Trunks? That's kinda surprise! I wonder what her reaction would be if/when he gets wished back to life.

Ah, so Videl finally confronts her father about what she's doing. And if he's that impressed with her skills now, I eagerly await his reaction when she finally completes her training. And I DEFINITELY am looking forward Videl's eventual rematch with Gohan. Their relationship is really starting to become my all time favorite in this story. I wonder which will come first: Videl realizing her crush on Gohan or High School graduation? Whatever direction you take it, I just hope I can see it soon!

Please try not to years for the next update! It would be heartbreaking because you're such an incredible author!

Wow, I never thought this story was gonna be continued. Imagine my surprise when I woke up and found a story update for it. First I stared, blinked, stared again, grabbed some breakfast, went to sleep again, stared, hit my head on a wall, and stared once more. But now I know it's real, yay!

Haven't lost the spirit of this fic, that's for sure. It's almost as if you never stopped writing. I'm gonna be real excited for more updates. Keep writing dead sexy!

OMG, YOU'RE BACK! YAY! Thank you so much for deciding to continue the fic! Great chapter, hope you post another chapter soon, welcome back!

ViG