I really like how it's going, you're not just gonna rush into the G/V stuff, builds up the story, please write more, and isn't Bulma going to Nameck too? Well she should, unless you have a bigger plan in mind!

great chap! keep up the great work! i personally liked this chapter (thinking of the bulma and vegeta get together of course) _

update ASAP

i hope you keep it going. and i like how your making the story prgress it seems more real.

Good chapter two. Very, very nice. Interesting how soon Bulma and Vegeta got their thing going. I wonder if Gohan will sneak onboard the ship, like you mentioned earlier. Great start, overall, and I'll be around for next chapter.

Oooo, nice start. Interesting way to redo the DBZ universe. Onward to next chapter.

I really like this a.u. you have going here. keep it up.

Good story so far.

I hope Gohan sneeks onto the ship cus if he doesn't he's goanna have to study. What a drag

kool i hope you keep posting. have one question how is gohan gonna sneak on the ship to namek?

the first chapter was great! i hope you update ASAP! so far i like your version of the series then the actual thing! i have a pretty good idea what chapter 2 is gonna be, lemon _