HORRIBLE this topic is about gohan and yet u make him pass out or w.e in the cell games lol wow crapy

Darn...I hate it when such amazing stories are abandoned. Yours was amazing, an outlook I had truly never seen before. I think you've done a marvelous job, and I'm sad to see this will never be updated again (probably, at least. I wouldn't mind if you did update though!) You have a really good writing style and I was curious to see what would happen to Gohan. But as you've not updated for around 5 years, I'll get over it. Nice story though.

Man your fic absolutely kicks ass. The story has really cool ideas and they way it is presented has been done quite well. I've been waiting for an update for awhile now so I just wanted to let you know that at least one fan of your story is constantly checking for updates. So whenever your ready please update... Also just wanted to say that the way you brought in your oc's was well done and deserves some applause. Good luck with the rest of the story!

why has it been so long? what happened? why aren't you writing the story anymore?

you know, videl should actually be older than gohan, because after that year he spent in the time chamber they were the same age 9 in the original dbz) i gueess this is just different, then. good chapter

well, gohan... that sucked. so hows cell gonna be defeated now?

how is peasa the strongest when goku is a natural form super saiyan? gohan's starting to make me angry. great chapter

gohan...untrained gohan. gosh, he sucks. as in streght of character. good chapter though

so who the heck is going to be able to beat cell? is here ever going to be fusions?

piccolo didnt find the androids, they found him at roshi's house remember? great chapter

are these androids different?e a cell? how can there be snce he used trunks time machine to go back?

so its begun. but will they still attack after they know that goku is 'gone'?

so 17 and 18 have no memories? i wonder if they'll ever be turned into humans... i hope krillin stays as a main character in the story

but goku isn't dead yet is he?

really good chapter