Well it's been a while since you last updated so you probable wont...but i hope you do anyway! :)

I'm sure you already know what I'm going to say here - this is another story well worth finishing. I am patient, and will look forward to seeing more when you have the opportunity to write!

Oh wow! Totally waiting for more! Great storyline, and I definitely appreciate how well everyone stays in character. Thanks for writing.

This story is very interesting this far, I hope you'll pick it up again.

This story is very interesting this far, I hope you'll pick it up again.

I love your story keep up good work

Read this and really, really, really enjoyed it. You've created a wonderfully interesting situation and an equally intriguing character in Jacklynne. The opening scene was beautifully handled, and I'm very much looking forward to reading this story as you post it. Hoepfully school won't be too demanding!

I can't wait to read the rest of your story. It is terriffic so far!

That wasn't exactly what I meant by another chapter, but thanks for letting us know. I just reread everything and I was wondering, exactly how she's going to have to betray him. What effect will this have on the crew? her career? her relationship (or non-relationship) with Jean-Luc? And the thing about Data filling her in on the language, I'm assuming that was a quick lie. What will the rest of the crew say when they hear about it? (rumors do fly) Depending on what she has to do, she could ruin her both her Starfleet Career and her friendships with the crew on the Enterprise. Will this affect how she acts?

I've decided I like giving you things to think about in your story. hehehe....

Oh wow, you really have my interest peaked. I must know what happens. I'm simply hanging here. Please, please, continue! I've really enjoyed it so far!

continue please!

Oh, thank you. Add more suspense, why don't you? You need to write more of this story, and explain to me some of the 50 million (well maybe not that many, but at least 15 thousand) questions I've asked you. If you don't answer them soon, I will loose sleep over this. PLEASE add a new chapter soon.

I like this. I hope you write the rest soon. (I'd give you more ideas, but I just emailed you a bunch, so enjoy those). You must write and post the rest of this chapter as soon as humanly possible (meaning right now)

Oh! I like this! You're writing this story, not me! What's with the questions at the end? I'll ask my own, and I expect you to answer them. *mutters under breath* (the nerve of an author *asking* the **readers** for the story) lol. Why does Jacklynne look so much like Beverly? Is there any significance to her name? What has Picard done for Beverly to need to get herself involved in something so obviously suspicious? What's with the black uniform? What other circumstances would she see Jacklynne? When would she see Jacklynne as a giggly teenager? Why does Jacklynne wear the black uniform? What does that mean? Why does she wear gloves? is it necessary for her not to leave fingerprints or something? What is the technology Beverly is receiving? What does it have to do with Picard? Why does Jacklynne want to help Picard? Does she even?

I have dozens more, if you want them, email me. hope this helps.

Hmm? Good question. I'm not really sure where I was going with this. I'll try to write more. All I know is that I want this to have a very dark tone.