I like the story, and I dont know if its active anymore, but I can offer to get more readers if you make more chapters

Awesome chapter. I feel bad for Daniel though. Update soon.

Seems good so far, please update soon!

I just found this story and I am sitting here asking for the rest of it :) PLEASE!

I love this idea. I don't know why, I just do :)

Loved the chapter and update soon! :)

Good story! Keep writing!

OMG! Aww... You're making me feel really bad for Daniel :((( He has nothing to live for anymore awww... Update soon!

Um. Could you do like the nextchapter that it's been like 20-30 years and daniel has given up hope. Will by now is a full fledged ranger and when will or halt stumbles across daniel's farm( for now he has a farm) daniel realizes who it is. That be really cool.

This story sounds really good. Update soon! :)

I really wanna know what happens now! You've got me all curious...update soon please!

But there would have been lots of rangers at the battle, so how could he know Daniel was referring to Halt? Anyway, at least Daniel knows where to go. It was smart of him to talk to a ranger (and brave), I hadn't thought of that. Update soon.

Wow ! Please update this ! It's a unique storyline and I wanna see where you're gonna take it so please update !

How soon do you update? This is EPIC!

Keep writing!

Wow! really good! I think Daniel should have shown more emotion when he was left on the battle field and when he heard that his wife died. Other than those two things, great job! I hope to read more!