Beautiful. You say so much in such a small space. I love fics with Luke/Jess interaction. You are very talented, and I hope you write more than just fanfic!

Holy crap, that was awesome! I actually liked it better than I liked your seasons three or what's there of four... It's... I don't know how to explain it. The writing is like Steinbeck or Hemingway would write... Excellent job! Are you going to keep going with this one? Keep writing,
~the14milo

Hehe. I like this. ^_^ It's cool and in character... I like fics that are in character.. And I'm blabbing now. Steinbeck is boring... gaah.. We had to read "The Pearl" in class, and it's.. well, boring, like I said. Keep writing. ^^

thank you

i thought this was a great story. Even if there's no big drama or anything, it's sweet and i really like it. nice job.

You convey so much with so little dialogue - congratulations. Punctuation is sometimes a little confusing though.

Have I mentioned lately how much I love you? Honestly, it's so wonderful to see a Luke/Jess interaction fic! I think this is the first one I've ever seen, let alone read and enjoyed. I truly think you're a gifted and talented writer! I can't wait see more of this fic :)

Great story. I haven't really seen all too many fics abt Luke and Jess, and I thought this one was great.

:) Another great piece of literature by our very own Stew. Could you bend your 'onehitwonder' rule, and stretch this out into a little story? Please?

Those two crack me up with all the awkwardness. Nicely done, nicely done. Inevitably, on some level, I think they must envy the kind of relationship Lorelai and Rory have.

i liked it
but if you don't like it than when you put out ads for toothpaste make sure it is minty
fresh : )

As with all your fics, this one perfectly captured the characters. Most fics don't go into detail with the L/J realtionship, but this is a fab example that deep inside, they have a mutual respect for each other. But anyway your writing is amazing and I can't wait for you to write again. (Like a continuation on Season 3... please please please!)
Keep it up!

You're making me completely redundant, but when has that ever stopped me? With stories like these you have earned the right to be a little conceited. :-D You captured Jess and Luke's relationship very well, so what if nothing really happens, but in my opinion a lot actually does. It's not a simple task to convey exactly what a simple conversation can transcend, but it was accomplished here.

I love it!!! Its seriously one of my faves! It really says alot the relationship between luke and jess, and I just..Love it lol :D

My fave thing was their silent agreement: you will never understand me and I will never understand you, so let’s agree on that if nothing else and do our own thing in our own space.

;) keep up the stunning work!!

i have no clue what you find so terrible about this story. It's good, really. Luke and Jess are in character, i understood the "betwix the lines" part, it was good. keep up the good work, as always, and hope you're doing well!