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| Reviews for Just a Girl |
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  Guest 5/12/13 . chapter 2 This is really good! I wish you'd continue! Could it possibly turn out to be a romance with a ranger? |
 Seriya Silvermist 4/1/13 . chapter 2This is good so far I'd like to see where this is going please update |
| AwsomeWierdo 3/28/13 . chapter 2 I like your story, but please! make them longer! |
| Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 2 Good please update! |
| angel14108 3/20/13 . chapter 2 This sounds like it's going to be really interesting and I can't wait for an update! |
| Savannah Silverstone 3/17/13 . chapter 2 Great chapter and the plot interests me ! Remember split up your chapter into paragraphs . The narration can be more descriptive too . Update soon |
| Mezzem313 3/16/13 . chapter 1 Well, that was interesting. |
| Savannah Silverstone 3/12/13 . chapter 1 Well...I haven't read enough about the story to actually judge it. You can make the chapters longer! That would help! Also... New topic/New person talking New paragraph If you squish it all together, it can kinda make the reader dizzy so... Anyway Other than thatI'd love to learn more about the girl and the ranger-. |
| Dash99 3/12/13 . chapter 1 I think this is going to be good! Can't wait for more! Please update! |
