|Reviews for Iris: A Professor Layton FanFic|
| Skelegirl 5/21/13 . chapter 9
This fanfic gives me so many feels I should have read it sooner omg
THEY DESERVE TO BE TOGWTHER OKAY
| Seventh Sunset 5/15/13 . chapter 9
CONGRATS ON PASSING THE 50 REVIEW MARK *confetti and balloons and glitter and happiness rain down*
Drunk Fredrich was a win. I would have laughed even harder if he questioned why Sophia had purple hair in the first place. Then again, colorful hair isn't really that uncommon in the Laytonverse xD
Excuse you and your foreshadowing but now I'm thinking of that scene where Anton is explaining the Elysian box to Luke and now I remember the part about the box and diary being stolen and that means that at some point in the story Anton will have to hear the box was stolen and go through the emotional stress of that and I don't know if I can handle the feels or not and just *sobs*
Each chapter just gets better and better. I like the direction it's headed in, an as always I can't wait for more!
| katrina 5/15/13 . chapter 5
Awhh so sweet! you've made the characters so real I love it :)
| The Mocking J 5/11/13 . chapter 9
Exciting foreshadowing, I think we'll be seeing more of that diary :D Lol drunken Fredrich!
| cutejana17 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Darn it, I was so absorbed in Tumblr and my drawing stuff that I almost forgot leaving a review. XD
(I guess you would recognize me as yamiakuzetsu/victory-duo?)
Anyway, heehee... The poor guy couldn't get Sophia off his mind! And I love how you did the conversation between the brothers; it was really fun to read. :D
| Demetry2499 5/10/13 . chapter 9
Another amazing chapter! AND THE DIARY! I almost forgot about that! I remember that when i first found it, i kept wondering who it belonged to, and then i finally figured out it was Anton's after finishing the game.
Figures Fredrich would get drunk... it seems much more likely for him than most other characters... and it adds some humor into the story! A very clever touch!
| ruby 5/9/13 . chapter 7
i probably already wrote a review for this chap but its still awesome the second time i read it! love it :*
| GeorgiexxxSuarez-JFT96 5/4/13 . chapter 8
I really liked this :) I thought it was very good :D
| GeorgiexxxSuarez-JFT96 5/4/13 . chapter 7
Why yes, I would much like a strawberry turnover, thank you muchly XD
| Seventh Sunset 5/4/13 . chapter 8
"Did you at least meet any of the other fine women I invited?"
"YES, AND NOW I'M GOING TO GO AFTER HER BECAUSE I LOVE HER." *jumps out window and into conveniently placed carriage and ride off into the night*
...I need to stop creating scenarios.
I like this chapter because makes the atmosphere of the ball and castle seem more real. Most people would just skip the fact that people actually have to leave the ball, so adding it in helped the flow and feel of the story. Also, what's better than reading about a drunk old woman (I mean other than those fancy Canadian milk bags)?
There was a little bit of repetitiveness with the word "again" in the beginning of the story, but other than that, this was lovely.
Oh, and before I sign off *hands you makeshift wings* just don't fly too close to the sun with them :P
| The Mocking J 5/4/13 . chapter 8
Awww He misses her already!
| RNemo 5/3/13 . chapter 8
heh heh heh heh heh...RUBY coloured steps...heheh...get it...haha...I'll stop talking now.
| Demetry2499 5/3/13 . chapter 8
Yay! A new chapter! Very well written, as usual! On a completely unrelated note, i agree with Anton: the name Anton definitely suits him better than the name Anthony. It's more mysterious...
| Renow13 5/3/13 . chapter 8
I am enjoying this story so much more than I should be. It's wonderful, I can't wait for more.
| Guest 4/29/13 . chapter 7
Yet another epic chapter:) Hehe, I do like strawberry turnovers...