Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Fireflies - Page 1 of 3
Mind of the Childishly Naive
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, it was SO amazing! xD I loved every moment of it, even though it's been YEARS since I saw the last of the Buu saga. The entire fic made me giggle and swoon and filled my heart with a BIG sense of so-much-warmth that I'm geniuinely DEPRESSED that there isn't MORE, even though I loved the way it ended!

It was long, but not too long, y'know? and it all flowed together VERY well. The Gohan and Videl made me smile (they always do).

I loved Chi-chi's whole little piece. Loveing her boys means feeding them, looking after them, cleaning up after them, and I loved the way she LOVES to do that, and missed it when Goku wasn't around.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED Vegeta. Period. His interaction with Goku. And Trunks. And Bulma! He's so inwardly sweet on them all, he just dunno how to show it. I love how it all came out.

All in all it was AMAZING! I normally read fics once, and rarely venture back again just to have to same giddy-happy feeling that comes with GREAT characterization and GREAT understanding of them. I will come back and read this again. Probably tomorow. xD

Great job!!
Scarlet Amaranth
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Wah, that was amazing~! Thanks for the great read.
Skolli
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Alright, so this is the other one I absolutely love. OMG where have you been all the time?! Another impressive fic. I found the scene when Trunks was asleep and woke up ready to attack very touching and sad at the same time. And Bulma being one of my favourite characters was also truly amazing in this one. I also liked the glimpses you gave into the lives of the Sons. I really do hope you want to write some more fics about Vegeta, Bulma and Trunks. Believe me, I'm not beneath begging ;)
Elagi
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
I wish I had a dollar for every time I couldn't help but smile while reading this. Wonderful, wonderful job.
Sarah Slutz
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
Great story! The characters were spot on, the dialogue awesome. Wonderful job!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
^_^ Great one shot.
b7-kerravon
2006-10-29 . chapter 1
Marvelous! I love Vegeta!
Dark Hope Assassin
2005-09-24 . chapter 1
It was SO sweet how you outlined both Saiya-jin families... Seriously, you're so good at understanding the characters' feelings when it comes to this... YOU ROCK! I adore you, really!

I think I'll snatch some sleep (it's 5 am) before I read any more of your wonderful, wonderful stories... Must... sleep... after all...

Yours sincerely,
DHA
teske
2005-06-01 . chapter 1
wow , it is a really beautiful story ! it made me feel calm & relaxed .. wow great story ... one of my favourites
Twinnie
2004-10-03 . chapter 1
That's very good... Very insightful. The characterization is great, and the evolution in Vegeta is written in a brilliant way. Reading this piece of work has made me feel calm, at peace... And the symbolism is perfect.

Congratulations on the good job!
Knight's Shadow
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Really nice story.
Mchan Briefs
2004-01-18 . chapter 1
That was an awesome story and it's so rare for me to like fics like this.
kichi
2004-01-17 . chapter 1
thatwas so sweet!
Candyland
2003-10-06 . chapter 1
That was superb.
Rissa42
2003-09-04 . chapter 1
Good Kami, Sholio, how do you do it.

For the second time in ten minutes (I just finished reading 'Ki-Blind') you've put a big silly grin on a Vegeta fan's face.

And trust me... it isn't often someone manages that.

Keep writin'!
Return to Top