 Mind of the Childishly Naive 2009-10-16 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, it was SO amazing! xD I loved every moment of it, even though it's been YEARS since I saw the last of the Buu saga. The entire fic made me giggle and swoon and filled my heart with a BIG sense of so-much-warmth that I'm geniuinely DEPRESSED that there isn't MORE, even though I loved the way it ended!
It was long, but not too long, y'know? and it all flowed together VERY well. The Gohan and Videl made me smile (they always do).
I loved Chi-chi's whole little piece. Loveing her boys means feeding them, looking after them, cleaning up after them, and I loved the way she LOVES to do that, and missed it when Goku wasn't around.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED Vegeta. Period. His interaction with Goku. And Trunks. And Bulma! He's so inwardly sweet on them all, he just dunno how to show it. I love how it all came out.
All in all it was AMAZING! I normally read fics once, and rarely venture back again just to have to same giddy-happy feeling that comes with GREAT characterization and GREAT understanding of them. I will come back and read this again. Probably tomorow. xD
Great job!! |
 Scarlet Amaranth 2009-04-06 . chapter 1Wah, that was amazing~! Thanks for the great read. |
 Skolli 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Alright, so this is the other one I absolutely love. OMG where have you been all the time?! Another impressive fic. I found the scene when Trunks was asleep and woke up ready to attack very touching and sad at the same time. And Bulma being one of my favourite characters was also truly amazing in this one. I also liked the glimpses you gave into the lives of the Sons. I really do hope you want to write some more fics about Vegeta, Bulma and Trunks. Believe me, I'm not beneath begging ;) |
 Elagi 2008-11-23 . chapter 1I wish I had a dollar for every time I couldn't help but smile while reading this. Wonderful, wonderful job. |
 Sarah Slutz 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Great story! The characters were spot on, the dialogue awesome. Wonderful job! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2007-07-08 . chapter 1^_^ Great one shot. |
 b7-kerravon 2006-10-29 . chapter 1Marvelous! I love Vegeta! |
 Dark Hope Assassin 2005-09-24 . chapter 1It was SO sweet how you outlined both Saiya-jin families... Seriously, you're so good at understanding the characters' feelings when it comes to this... YOU ROCK! I adore you, really!
I think I'll snatch some sleep (it's 5 am) before I read any more of your wonderful, wonderful stories... Must... sleep... after all...
Yours sincerely,
DHA |
 teske 2005-06-01 . chapter 1 wow , it is a really beautiful story ! it made me feel calm & relaxed .. wow great story ... one of my favourites |
 Twinnie 2004-10-03 . chapter 1That's very good... Very insightful. The characterization is great, and the evolution in Vegeta is written in a brilliant way. Reading this piece of work has made me feel calm, at peace... And the symbolism is perfect.
Congratulations on the good job! |
 Knight's Shadow 2004-01-29 . chapter 1 Really nice story. |
 Mchan Briefs 2004-01-18 . chapter 1That was an awesome story and it's so rare for me to like fics like this. |
 kichi 2004-01-17 . chapter 1 thatwas so sweet! |
 Candyland 2003-10-06 . chapter 1That was superb. |
 Rissa42 2003-09-04 . chapter 1Good Kami, Sholio, how do you do it.
For the second time in ten minutes (I just finished reading 'Ki-Blind') you've put a big silly grin on a Vegeta fan's face.
And trust me... it isn't often someone manages that.
Keep writin'! |