Not much to say since this was just the prolouge, but it was well written. I look foward to the next chapter.

A nice short prologue. Did well in introducing the setting and the characters. Though some things don't quite add up. For one, did the guardians approve of the 'Purifiers'/ from the way you describe them, they sound pretty official. And for two, is Spyro and Cynder around? I know they would never sanction the 'Purifiers' actions. Good prologue, sounds to be a promising story, I will look forward to your next update.

This is a interesting story. "The Purfiers" kind of remind me of the Nazis and the holocaust. With their "Perfect" society idea, I can't offer anymore comments since this is only the prologue. But I hope to see more soon.

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This story looks great! Totally keeping an eye on it!

Don't have any complaints about it either!

Keep on writin' mate!