HUUUUH?! WHY END IT?! ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY?!
-soooobbinggggg- sigh im such a loser...
Even though you didnt make a pairng and made a friendshippyish - family ending... I still like it...

this is a good chapter though Lucci is very very very creepy in this (rereads and shutters) reeeeeeaaaallllllly reallly creepy.

i think that some of the CP9 members should decide to bring Luka back they find Ace's ship and the crew fights with them while one of CP9 members knocks Luka out and takes her back.

oh and this was awesome chapter keep updating i can't wait to read the next one

Im wondering ... What if CP9 meets Luka again? I mean... Will Lucci and Kaku still love her and try to take her back or will they hate her and try to kill her?¿?¿? This is so fustrating and sad. I feel pretty bad for Kalifa as well. I would be sad if my best friend that was aplike a sister to me left, died, or betrayed me...

sooo neighter the Cp9 or Luka could fight at there fullest because despite everything there were basicly a family for six years I mean it seemed they only had eachother to relie on...is that true? If so how strong would there skills (the cp9) and more importantly Luka actually be?

interesting. i like it.

Lucci... how could you not care at all for Luka? even calling her a weaking? -sobsobsob-
sooo... whats gonna happen to Luka now?
and does Lucci and Kaku still love her?

nice chapter i can't wait to read the next one i loved how Luka just showed everyone the emotions that were raging in to save ACE, ROBIN, and ICEBERG. keep up the good work

oh man this is a sad chapter and really you have got to ferl bad for all of the cp9s they were w close team damn I don't want to be any of them. Brillint chapter though.

awww. (i literally said that after i read this chapter)
can't wait for next chapter.

Kaku and Lucci... confessed... im in shock... i didnt think they would do it at the same time... i still like it though...
but the end of this chapter made me sad... CP9 members thinking about having to kill one of their precious (；_；)

so far i really like it hope you update soon

I vote for luffyxmarco please.

im pretty excited for the next chapter now. i mean, how will Kaku and Lucci deal with this?! dont they love her or something?

i love chapter you did a as Franky would say a Super Job keep up the good work. i can't wait to read the next chapter. oh and when Ace and his crew show up Luka should run into them and then go off on Ace saying i told you to leave the island you little baka and then Ace should say well that's kind off hard for me to do when you still have my pinkie.
keep up the good job