wow-you captured it brilliantly!

Nice.

that was great! very atmospheric - i was right there with him.

Excellent emotions! I've been where Carter was. You got it just right!

That was good, short, but deep. (Can I just say, I LOVED "Homecoming"!) Also, don't put yourself down in the begining of the story, it's up to the readers to decide if it's good. :)

Really Good caught the moment just right

come on-lets have another!