  Jennifer 10/19/00 . chapter 1 Nice. *smile* |
| Jaclyn 10/15/00 . chapter 1 great job! well-written, good portrayal, blah blah blah, all that stuff...keep writing! |
 Lyra of Destiny 10/14/00 . chapter 1I thought nothing could top 100 Days... Well, I'm wrong. I love this! |
| girle 10/14/00 . chapter 1 I think that you could have explored his feelings a bit more |
| Lanna 10/13/00 . chapter 1 That was good! I've benn waiting for someone to do a coda! I'm glad someone finally wrote one! |
| triviawitch 10/13/00 . chapter 1 Pretty good. worth reading. |
| Gracie 10/13/00 . chapter 1 Great ending. Kinda choppy, but this effectively conveys the "stream-of-consciousness" idea. Not only that, but it really does sound like Tom. As my favorite ST critic likes to say, "Me likes." : ) |
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