that was so cute...

I loved it...

NICE.

The characters were written wonderfully. I mean you captured each personality rea well. Plus it was so funny!

Keep up the great work

foreignkid1

Awesome! I could see Davis doing all of that too! :D T.K. and Kari really do make a good pair! This was really funny! Good job! /

Decent story. It seemed pretty ordinary and cliche, but it worked well somewhat.

Hikeru, yay! Err, Daiyako is weird... _ I like Kenyako/Kouyako better.

hehe sweet

HAHA DAVIS SUCKS THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS A TAKARI ! I THINK KEN AND YOLEI GO TOGETHER BUT THAT'S MY OPINION ! WELL C YA !

Its ok i know my baby Davis will realise that kari is a and that i can give him more than anyone could. I used to like kair but i have seen the new episods and she is sucha for not lov'in Davis. He is sweet, kind, funny, proud, and just plain loveable!

I also used to like T.K. but i just watched the last newest episode and not only does kari act like a but how could T. B. or what ever his name is yell at my baby like that. If T.I. and Davis fought i know my baby would win and that snot-nosed little T.P. would be in the hospital! DAVIS FOREVER! KARI AND T.F. BURN IN HELL FOREVER!

lol. i like it. cute. poor Davis...so baka! i doubt Yolei would ever like him cept for the fact that he could get her closer to Ken for being a rival against him in soccer.

Cool

Very cute!I liked Tai in this too!Takari is awesome!..nice job!...raine

Um... Demiveemon? Isn't suppose to be Chibimon? Anyways, great story! Funny, funny stuff. This should go under Humor, not general.

That was so funny and cool! Davis is such an idiot.. -.-; I love Takari! And (especially) Mimato! This fic rocked! Keep writing!

Hehe. Good, but too much Davis, not 'nough Takari. But still good, very good.

OMG! This was so funny and perfect! Just what I needed now!Davis is SOOOO stupid... He's such an a$$! This was so cool! I love this fic!