Maxwell...why wasn't I informed that you wrote a story ? Hm ...
I am supposed to know these things you evil little ** ...

Great start .. now where is the rest ?

Cool! I like very much! Please continue soon! Ja Ne! ^.~

I see how it is, you dont mention pyrotechnic_kitty in your profile your number one spider-man fan buddy!!! i think im gonna cry, ah not really i didnt ready your story, im too lazy, but i just want to write you a review and tell you how cool this story is!!! I especially luv the part when....yea, ne ways. how come u dont read my stories? i got like five in spider-man and one in original fantasy. Look i even signed you guestbook at ur website. aint i cool gettin a college education? not really but it makes me feel special. ah well, write me a review back, i think my most recently updated story is silver phoenix and spider-man

cya, brandi

DUO!!!!!!! You brat. I had to log in jus tto review your *wonderful* story. But hahahaha it was all worth it. You need to write more cause I'm like mentally cursing cause I hate cliff hangers and you sooooooooooo left me hanging. What the heck? How could you do that to your **?
I was thinking of getting fei-Fei on you, but that's too mean. Even for me. Catch ya later!
Kidd (a.k.a princess kidd or brieanne)

Ooo this is a great start! I hope you get more up soon! ^.^

I like it! Please write more! ^_^

ooooooooh! more, more, more! me love it! 'nother chapy soon! seya!
~chibi fairy o3

This is pretty good. You could add some descriptive language, make it a bit more flowery, but a good down-to-earth story is something we all need once in a while... Pretty good! Please continue! Zelink 4ever!

SK's rating: 9/10