Sick, very, very sick. But quite funny, though I did like the first one better. Anywayz, this was good nevertheless.

Uuuu! That was bad! Me likes it!*giggles*. It was very intresting and amusing and etertaining story. You did good job, me thinks ;)

very well written. lol

hahahahahahahahahahaha very good.

really well written...

write an other one to follow up this story plot...

this sound a mulit-part story... keep up the good work

YESSSSSS! Thea was one good spritzer, lemme tell ya!

oh dear LOL yeah that one was funny too

that was funny LOL :P

Funny...