 FrictionX42 6/12/10 . chapter 1heh, goes crossways with what many martial arts state; that you truly need to master control of oneself, but in this case, you may have stumbled upon something. It surprises me not in the least that Ranma would recognize and take advantage of it. |
 sweetpea101 6/6/10 . chapter 1 haha i love it XD its about damn time akane beat those girls butt(excuse the bad word) keep writing plz :D |
 tomboy 26 10/25/09 . chapter 1Lol .. that was one of the funniest things I've read in a while. I could so see Ranma training Akane like that .. and I loved that she kicked so much ass ^.^
She's a goddess huh? And he's her chosen mate, the war horse god? Lmao .. well, duh .. their destined for each other.
Awesome story. |
 katdemon18 11/3/08 . chapter 1totally and completely brilliant and rings fairly true to ranma and akane's relationship and i totally want to hear the tomboy song now
great job |
 Lana Atkins 6/17/08 . chapter 1I loved this. Very true to their characters, and in perfect language (like it when stories are well-written :) )
It's probably how Ranma WOULD train Akane too, if there ever came a time that he decided it was necessary. :)
One thing you might want to do is to use dividers for your different scenes so we know that the scene's changed :) It's a lot easier that way.
Kudos on an excellent story. |
 kachiryu-chi 8/15/07 . chapter 1Hahaha! really good! fantastic. i kept laughing... |
 Rose1948 8/14/07 . chapter 1Egads! Talk about juggling nitroglycerin! *chuckles* Very nice! |
 Blackdex 5/22/07 . chapter 1A dangerous trick indeed. Ciao |
 She Knows Best 11/3/06 . chapter 1aw, that was really cute :). |
 The-Shadow002 7/14/05 . chapter 1Ah this is a fabulous story please continue and dont leave as a one shot. Great lenght and no grammer or spelling problems either. Loved the great lines in this story like "Island princes are kinda stupid that way." and i love the way you have Ranma training Akane. Great work please write more of this :) |
 Alex Ultra 9/23/04 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Funny!
^.^
LATER |
 Knight's Shadow 5/25/04 . chapter 1 Nice to see Ranma in control for once.Great story. |
 dogbertcarroll 2/25/04 . chapter 1LOL! I love it! I want to hear the Tomboy song! |
 Jho 5/12/03 . chapter 1Nice story :) |
 Adyen 9/30/01 . chapter 1o.O OoooKkk... This is just plain weird. Good, but weird anyways. heh. Keep the the good work! I want to see more of this kind of fics... |