 tomboy 26 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Lol .. that was one of the funniest things I've read in a while. I could so see Ranma training Akane like that .. and I loved that she kicked so much ** ^.^
She's a goddess huh? And he's her chosen mate, the war horse god? Lmao .. well, duh .. their destined for each other.
Awesome story. |
 kittydemon18 2008-11-03 . chapter 1totally and completely brilliant and rings fairly true to ranma and akane's relationship and i totally want to hear the tomboy song now
great job |
 Lana Atkins 2008-06-17 . chapter 1I loved this. Very true to their characters, and in perfect language (like it when stories are well-written :) )
It's probably how Ranma WOULD train Akane too, if there ever came a time that he decided it was necessary. :)
One thing you might want to do is to use dividers for your different scenes so we know that the scene's changed :) It's a lot easier that way.
Kudos on an excellent story. |
 kachiryu-chi 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Hahaha! really good! fantastic. i kept laughing... |
 Rose1948 2007-08-14 . chapter 1Egads! Talk about juggling nitroglycerin! *chuckles* Very nice! |
 Blackdex 2007-05-22 . chapter 1A dangerous trick indeed. Ciao |
 She Knows Best 2006-11-03 . chapter 1aw, that was really cute :). |
 The-Shadow002 2005-07-14 . chapter 1Ah this is a fabulous story please continue and dont leave as a one shot. Great lenght and no grammer or spelling problems either. Loved the great lines in this story like "Island princes are kinda stupid that way." and i love the way you have Ranma training Akane. Great work please write more of this :) |
 Alex Ultra 2004-09-23 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Funny!
^.^
LATER |
 Knight's Shadow 2004-05-25 . chapter 1 Nice to see Ranma in control for once.Great story. |
 dogbertcarroll 2004-02-25 . chapter 1LOL! I love it! I want to hear the Tomboy song! |
 Jho 2003-05-12 . chapter 1Nice story :) |
 Adyen 2001-09-30 . chapter 1o.O OoooKkk... This is just plain weird. Good, but weird anyways. heh. Keep the the good work! I want to see more of this kind of fics... |
 The Angry Generalization 2001-09-21 . chapter 1Ha HA!! That's hilarious! I especially like Cologne's last line! It said "oh" but I read it "D'oh!" Actually this story was more like insanely clever than hilarious, but still a very big-bellied-laugh-out-loud sort of fing. Masterful! |
 Ranko-chan 2001-08-27 . chapter 1 ;D Bravo!! VERY GOOD!! heh heh, the war horse god and the goddess with a hammer, huh? :P good story!! ^_^ |