Reviews for Beyblade Metal Fury: Sandra's Secret
Dequincy 6/18/13 . chapter 11
Sandra's evil self also merges with Nemesis.
Dequincy 6/18/13 . chapter 13
Sheila also reveals that she worked for the Dark Nebula, and H.D. academy. She aslo reveals that it was her who told Doji where to find Kyoya and to put him in that canyan.
Dequincy 6/18/13 . chapter 13
Sheila also reveals that it was her who suggested that Dr. Zigerrat give Toby a new body. At the Nemesis island Lauren confronts Sheila about all of the horrible things she did to her in front of everyone. As do Stephanie, Maggie, Brooke and Amber. Leave an author's note at the end of the next chapter to let me know if you plan on using this as well.
Dequincy 6/18/13 . chapter 12
Great chapter, as always. Listen, i have a few more OC characters for you to add to the story.

Sheila Cutter. History: Sheila is known as a villain and Kyoya's second ex-girlfriend. Sheila's history revolves around her long-running conflict with Lauren Flinmore (Kyoya's first ex-girlfriend), who she had attempted to kill so she could have Kyoya for herself. She also had conflict with Stephanie Foster, Maggie Foster, Amber Moon, and Brooke Hogan (Other OC charecters i want in the story). Sheila was a bey mechanic, just like Madoka. She also has a bey called NIBIRU (Although she never bey battles often). She immediately fell in love with Kyoya, who was in a relationship with Lauren Flinmore at the time. Her feelings for Kyoya quickly turned from infatuation to obsession. In order to steal him away from his girlfriend Lauren Flinmore, Sheila blackmailed her by threatning Leo's life. So Lauren broke up Kyoya to keep Leo safe. As a year went by, Sheila and Kyoya got real close to each other. Leo also started to get close to Sheila. Sheila's mother, Sherleen Cutter, found out about her daughter's threat and intended to tell Kyoya the truth, but suffered a stroke that rendered her speechless. Sheila sent her mother to her house, before Sherleen could expose her. Lauren eventually decided to come clean and tell Kyoya the truth. But not before she kidnapped both Lauren and Sherleen, and almost succeeded in killing both of them, when during a brief struggle Lauren accidentally kicked over a lantern on a coffee table, setting the house they were imprisoned in on fire. Lauren and Sherleen are rescued by her ex-boyfriend, Paul Simmons, and his new girlfriend, Lacey Beryl. Sheila was never found, and authorities presumed that she perished in the fire when the house blew up. Lauren is reunited with Kyoya, and Lauren tells him and Leo the truth about why she broke up with him and how Sheila was behind the whole thing. She also tells him that Sheila held both her, and her own mother hostage at her own house, and that the house blew up after Paul and Lacy had gotten her and Sherleen out, and that Sheila is presumed dead. Unbeknownst to Lauren, Kyoya, Leo, Paul, Lacey and the police, Sheila had escaped from the burning building just before it blew up. Picking up a discarded news papper in an area diner, she read about an opening working as a bey machanic for an organization called the Dark Nebula. Sheila then told Doji about her past with Kyoya, and that he would make an excelent lab rat for his exsperements. She told Doji that Kyoya lived in Metal Bey City. After the rest of the year had gone by, and a new year began, Doji went to Metal Bey City picked up Kyoya and his gang of face hunters(Kyoya and Lauren had broken up at this time). Kyoya and Doji had a bey battle, but Kyoya lost and had to go with Doji. Although Kyoya was in the Dark Nebula' Sheila never revealed herself to him. Sheila then went to Doji and suggested that Doji leave Kyoya stranded in a canyon for a whole day. Which Doji agreed to do. By doing this, Sheila had hoped for Doji to brain wash Kyoya so she could finally have him as her own. And it did work, but it didn't last long, because Gingka Hugane had snapped him out of it with a bey battle.

After the Dark Nebula was defeated by Gingka and friends, Sheila left Japan and went to America and stayed in a town called New York, where she met a teenage boy named Zeo Abyys, who was working for a man named Dr. Ziggerat. Sheila then got a job at an academy called the H.D. academy, which Dr. Ziggerat owns. When in an interview with him, Sheila revealed her past to the doctor about working with the Dark Nebula. It was then that Zigerrat revealed to her that he was the owner of the Dark Nebula and not Doji. Sheila quickly worms her way into Zeo's life. Sheila and Zeo quicky fall in love, which angers Zeo's ex-girlfriend Stephanie, who suspects Sheila is just using Zeo. Sheila and a girl named Brooke Hogan became close friends. Throughout Sheila's time in America and her stay in New York. Sheila and Zeo's relationshop became rockey when Sheila introduced her friend to him, who turned out to be Brooke Hogan, Masamune's girlfriend. Zeo then explanes to Sheila that his childhood friend Masamune betrayed him and his friend Toby, who fell ill to an unknown desease, by abandoning them after seeing Gingka Hugane win the Battle Bladers tournament. Zeo the asked Sheila to end her friendship with Brooke, which she says no to. Zeo feels betrayed by her actions and a rift is created in their relationship. When Sheila becomes concerned that Zeo is excluding her from his life, Sheila and Zeo make a deal on a bey battle. If Sheila won, they would continue the relationship, but if Zeo won, they would break up. Much to Sheila's dismay, Zeo won the bey battle and ended their realationship. For some time, while at the H.D. academy, Sheila began to see a psychiatrist name Dr. Fred, who is friends with Zeo's ill friend Toby. Zeo suspects that Sheila is hiding something from him about her past, and tries to pry information from Dr. Fred. But after Zeo leaves, Sheila, who was standing at the door listening to their conversation, confronts him. Dr. Fred then thretens to go to Zeo and tell him everything that Sheila has told him about her past, unless Sheila continues her theripy appointments. After having a few more words with each other, Sheila agreed to continue her appointments. But Dr. Fred knows that Sheila has no intrest in theripy. None at all. Its all a stall tecneque. Then threatens to go to Zeo with the truth anyway. However, during a bey battle between Sheila and Dr. Fred, their beys collide with each other, causeing an explosion that sends Fred fying off the balcony to his death. Later, when her secrets finally surface, Sheila holds Stephanie, Leo, Brooke and Zeo hostage with her bey NIBIRU, welcoming them to her "goodbye party." At the "party", Sheila tells everyone in attendence how they had personally wronged her (Which she felt everyone did except for Brooke, who stopped their friendship after learning of her past). She then threaten to shoot and kill everyone with her bey except Brooke, who stunned Sheila when she said that Stephanie and Zeo are family to her and if Sheila were to kill them, she would have to kill Brooke as well. Holding her bey in her loncher to Stephanie, Sheila has a chang of heart and drops her loncher. When everyone steps in front of her, Sheila swallows a bottle of poison. Having survived, Sheila is placed in a psychiatric hospital, but does not remain there for long, however. After the rest of the year had gone by, and a new year started, Sheila was released from the mental hospital. By now it was time to start the world beyblade championships. Sheila then set her sights on another guy...Toby, Zeo and Masamune's sick friend. She continues to visit Toby in the hospital at this time. At the coffee shop, into Maggie foster, whom she befriends. Sheila then sets her sights on getting Toby to fall in love with her. However, Toby has feelings for Maggie instead. After learning of Sheila's past from Zeo, Maggie go's to Sheila's house to inform her that she needs to find herself a new boyfriend, because Maggie wouldn't allow her to visit Toby anymore. Sheila then snaps and nearly chokes Maggie to death. Damien later kidnapps her and holds her prisoner at the H.D. academy. Sheila, wanting to prove to everyone that she has changed, agrees to releas Maggie. After Maggie is released, Sheila tries to think of a way to get Toby to fall in love with her. She then remembers that Dr. Ziggerat is Toby's doctor and go's to him for help. She tells Dr. Zigerrat to give Toby an arnagment and a new body so that he will be brainwashed into loving her. Zigerrat then reveals to Sheila that that was his true plan all along. Except for the part about brainwashing Toby into loving Sheila. Sheila later meets Amber Moon, and the two become such good friends. However, Amber soon learns of Sheila's past and ends their friendship. When a friendship begins between Stephanie and Toby, a paranoid Sheila becomes jealous and attempts to drown Stephanie in a pool. To prevent Stephanie from telling anyone about this inncident, Sheila threatens to kill Zeo. After the world championships are over and Gang Gang Galaxy are pronounced the winners, Dr. Ziggerat puts his plan into motion and gos to the place where the party for Gang Gang Galaxy. There he reveals is true research to the whole world: Spyral Force. He also reveals a new bey and its owner, twisted timpo and foust. Who is Toby. Gingka, Masamune and and all of the other teams of the world beyblade championships then made their way to Hades City, where they foyiled the doctors plan and saved Toby. Despite Keyoya being there in Hades City, Sheila still did not reveal herself to him. After the city crashed in the ocean, thanks to Ryuga's help, Gingka and the others saved Toby and stopped the city from causing a globel meltdown. After everyone got off the city, it sank into the see, making the police beleive once again that Sheila Cutter is dead. Sheila then returned to Metal Bey City in Japan and went to see Kyoya and Leo's father. She then convinced him to kill Kyoya and Leo's mother. After killing his wife, Kyoya and Leo's father was arrested for the crime. Amber, who was in Metal Bey City at that time, found out that Sheila was still alive and threaten to exspose her and her involvement with Kyoya and Leo's mother's death. However, during a brief sruggle, Amber fell and hit her head on a table, thus losing her memory about Sheila still being alive, and her involvment in Kyoya and Leo's mother's death. Amber then wakes up to find Sheila long gone, and leaves Japan and go's back to New York.

Sheila will appear in Beyblade Metal Fury: Sandra's secret. She will be in league with Pluto, Doji, Sandra's evil self and the revival of Nemesis. Once everyone makes it to Mexico in the mayan ruins,
Dequincy 6/18/13 . chapter 13
Nice chapter. You did great with Leo's character. Your job was perfect. I look forward to the next chapter, and i pray that its soon. God bless you and have a blessed day.
zzaa3 6/16/13 . chapter 12
Sorry but Blaze is more calm and polite
GalaxyPegasus14 6/16/13 . chapter 12
XD yay! You're back! So... Sandra has help now? XD good for her!
Dequincy 6/7/13 . chapter 2
Hey. Great story. Listen, i have an OC carachter for you.

"Leo Tategami."

Leo is 12 years old and is the young brother of Kyoya.
He is almost like his brother, except for the fact that he's a happy peson and smiles more ofter. He looks just like Mokuba from YUGIOH, and the bey he owns is named Lion. Leo will meet up with Sandra and they will travil together.

Leave an authors note at the end of the next chapter to let me know if you'll be using this character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and i pray that its soon.
SplashHart 6/4/13 . chapter 11
Aw, poor Kyoya.

Update soon!

May the powerful connection light your way...
GalaxyPegasus14 6/1/13 . chapter 11
XD great chapter! Oh, and i have a request. There is another authoress who writes her own Kyoya/OC story, called Times Change, but she doesnt get any reviewers other than me. So, could you go read it and review? Again, great chapter and i can't wait to see more!
SplashHart 5/25/13 . chapter 10
Nice chappie !

Update soon :3!

May the powerful connection light your way...
SplashHart 5/22/13 . chapter 9
Awesome chappie !

Update soon :D!

May the powerful connection light your way...
zzaa3 5/22/13 . chapter 1
name: Shiori Isamu
meanings first bookmark seconds is bravely
age:12-14
she is the same age as Chi yun but the think she is younger than yuu because height.
gender: Female
personality; she is just like are name she is brave and smart. shiori is very willing and will do any thing to help. she love play pranks with her good and new friend Blaze. she can be serious if people are hurt. her spirit can light up a dark room or even a city.

likes: sports, games,blading she just love it. she likes learning new thinks to do for a prank and she love who shorter than her.
dislikes: jerks, people who call her little girl ,chao xin and masamune. puppy dog eyes ( blaze's)

rivals: ginga, masamune and blaze.

her best friend is blaze.
clothing: . she wear white skinny jeans and a panda hoodie with the ears and wear black and white runners.

appearance: she was fair skin with large green eyes an has a scare that looks like an x on her has brown hair that stops at her mid back on than she cuts it to her cheeks.

bey:the phoenix of life
balance bey
special move is wing knife
phoenix

pairings: Chi yun has a crush on her
she like ginga.
Mellida 5/21/13 . chapter 1
LOL. Yor main character Sandra has the same name as me in real life :)
zzaa3 5/21/13 . chapter 7
sorry the one i wrote before had spelling mistake and you can have blaze if you want but answer if you want the occ
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