I think you should write a little. About them married great chapter

what happens after they get married?! can't wait for more!

cute and funny

Mermaid island and update soon please

Sanji probably... -;

I am very confused with the ending. I have no idea what is going on. Where is Ace and Shanks and everyone? Are they on the ocean? On a ship?
And if you're planning on having them got on the island, then that is impossible. MEN ARE FORBIDDEN FROM THE ISLAND OF WOMEN.
Even in the manga, they were only allowed on a small strip of land and that was it.
Over all, it was a very confusing chapter. I would suggest re-reading and re-writing this chapter.

Zoro would I vote Zoro. Also. Great chapter update soon

Great chapter, love the story so far! :D
As for the random question: IF one of the Strawhat's turned into a girl it would be Sanji and she would fall for Luffy! Maybe I'm just saying this because its a deeply desired wish for this to happened or maybe because I truely do think so... Most likely both.

That was so cute. I just spazzing out man. I soooo looking forward to the next chapter but Shanks won't find the Isle of Women because his boat doesn't have paddles and someone like Shanks doesn't have the "woman's intuition" to get there.
Although I'm sure Hancock will take care of her. Oh man I loved the whole crowd's reaction, that was hilarious.
Poor Hawkeye, not only does he sort of have to train Zoro but he has to spend the rest of his time thinking of a wedding present.

great story but i like to see more of garp

Now here's the tricky part. Now that Whitebeard and Ace are alive, what's going to happen during the two years and how's that going to change.
I'm writing my own version of the story and I've already thought about what's going to happen and that's staying in my head.
But any way, I loved that chapter. Though I think there should've been some sort of indication of a sudden time skip. Cause I flipped out. As long as Ace is alive I'm happy and the pairing is just too cute.
I'm looking forward to seeing how your mind works this situation out.

how can you leave it off here...
I think it be neat to see the reactions of him claiming Luka as his woman...
I think it be neat for the marines to ask what he means. And become more determined to kill luka... but shanks is fighting and Luka sees an under handed attack coming at him and uses her haki that she doesn't know she has been using and knocks most marines out and then shanks ends the war... He takes her to be trained by him then the dark king and boa takes her to be trained and she is like a sister to luka

I always love it when people save Ace in their stories! TT

Great chapter can't wait for the next one

Its so cute that Ace is over protective. If Ace meets up with Shanks Shanks better run. An brother that's overprotective is like a demon believe me.