|Reviews for A Retelling: Fulton's Story|
| banks99 4/10/13 . chapter 31
great story i hope you write another soon
| Dimples73 4/9/13 . chapter 31
interesting story some of the chaps could have been longer. Good job
| texaskid 3/28/13 . chapter 31
The plot is amazing. Really great.
A couple things, I don't know why people always write Portman and Fulton with bad parents. It's such a stereotype and a cliche. I understand the point but I wish you hadn't done it.
Second in this last chapter where it's talking about Fulton speaking you switch to third person point of view which is a little awkward.
Also you could have combined a few of the chapters as some were barely a paragraph long and not really that worth of being their own chapter but I suppose that you had your reasons for doing so.
The reason Terry couldn't join makes sense and doesn't seem like too much of a stretch. I liked it. I also liked that you waited until the story was done before you posted it but I wish you had spread it out a little bit. The number of chapters may scare some people off.
I loved the back story and the reason why Portman couldn't come at the beginning of the year and why Ms. Mckay had to be their tutor.
All in all a very nice story.
| Dimples73 3/17/13 . chapter 1
I liked it Good Job