great story i hope you write another soon

interesting story some of the chaps could have been longer. Good job

The plot is amazing. Really great.

A couple things, I don't know why people always write Portman and Fulton with bad parents. It's such a stereotype and a cliche. I understand the point but I wish you hadn't done it.

Second in this last chapter where it's talking about Fulton speaking you switch to third person point of view which is a little awkward.

Also you could have combined a few of the chapters as some were barely a paragraph long and not really that worth of being their own chapter but I suppose that you had your reasons for doing so.

The reason Terry couldn't join makes sense and doesn't seem like too much of a stretch. I liked it. I also liked that you waited until the story was done before you posted it but I wish you had spread it out a little bit. The number of chapters may scare some people off.

I loved the back story and the reason why Portman couldn't come at the beginning of the year and why Ms. Mckay had to be their tutor.

All in all a very nice story.

I liked it Good Job