WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT?ITS JUNK, SHIT, STUPIDNESS I HATE YOU!

i thought it was sweet, but a little short. i also felt kinda bad that u only had one review so far. (-)

i thought it was sweet, but a little short. i also felt kinda bad that u only had one review so far. (-)

Could you do me a favor and redo the whole thing? This time go into detail, take your time, don't rush through it.

I like the idea, but really how did Vegeta fall in love with Bulma? Bulma and Vegeta's relationship is alot more than love at first sight. They are annoyed with eachother at first, then they loathe eachother, then hate comes into place, and soon you love annoying that person and get (sometimes) jealous of when that other person argues with another person. O.O Love/Hate relationship people. Hate isn't the opposite of Love, indifference is. Now please K-S, go slowly with this fanfic and redo it for me.

I'll keep bugging you if you don't. It's a perfectly great idea, with a nice ending but it's too rushed! _