awesome..:)

This is very good. You wonder what's going through Snake's mind at some of the most critical parts of the game, and you've captured him quite nicely.

yo listen that was great you really captured snake in a hole new way keep them coming

*sniffle* Awwees! Excellent story! I like it very much! _

A wonderful peice. I've always wondered what went through Snake's mind at that moment...you did an excellent job of getting inside his head_

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I loved this fic :) I hope you write more because I just looooove MGS fics (especially ones involving Meryl & Snake!) Keep up the good work, you're on my faves list!

That was nice... It's hard for me to picture those words comming out Snakes mouth, and therefore hard for me to accept as HIS thoughts... though it's probably what he was thinking... you know, in the BACK of his mind... Not in the.. er "front" as this story shows it. That's why I personally would never write a first person POV with Snake. I'd probably do a 3rd person describing what he's thinking, to give it a more detatched feel. But I feel you pulled this off very well.

Oh. Write something with Otacon. KUDASAI? _?

Ah, another good one! I liked this one a lot. You skills as a writer have really inspired me and impessed me. Keep it up!

(too lazy to sign in) Cool You're right about not getting the dialog right, but hey, who cares? Oh, and to get across the place with the claymores, just go along the wall to your right. They can't get you there.

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Good Story...I liked it...

this has everything the last metal gear solid story did not have

Great story! Really gripping.

That was great! Very sad, but that was a great POV by Snake. I lved the game and it killed me in that part, that's fantastic!