|Reviews for If I fall|
| sosoguillemot 4/22/13 . chapter 1
somehow it just fits them... grey and natsu are always having eachother's back even when they are bickering and in an odd way, it just seems logical natsu will catch grey if he falls and grey will catch natsu if he falls. and without even having to ask the other. that's friendship!
nah, i like your song.
| Clueless Painguin 3/18/13 . chapter 1
Hey there! I'm not sure if I should PM you about this or not, but whatever.
You have 2 basic grammar errors in your summary that you should fix if you can find the time. You used "tale" instead of... have?
It's in this context "...but if people could please *tale* a look and give there opinions..."
Also, you used 'there' instead of 'their'
Other than that, I hope that you upload the story soon!
| theabridgedkuriboh 3/18/13 . chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was so beautiful