| Reviews for Zelgadis and the Cute Wild Beast |
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matchbox365matches 9/7/02 . chapter 2:] i usualy don't like poems but yours are great. yep, and that's all i'll say |
Karu Leonnese 8/16/02 . chapter 2*giggles* I like! Nifty cool! *insert witty remarks here* Uh..yeah. .o Great poems! |
MoroTheWolfGod 8/15/02 . chapter 2Aww how cute! |
that is secret 8/14/02 . chapter 1Another cute one! I like the lines "sing it out, or speak / if you singing's weak." I also like the last lines "Love me or hate me, I don't mind / Just gimme a reason not to leave you behind." Very cute-iful. At times the poem seems to get a bit out of rhythm, but you are also trying to rhyme it, so I can see why. ;-) |