Kewl! That was great! Please finish! By the way, I heard name is Bunny, but you can't trust some people. Oh well, Cindy's good.

Vegeta leaves? :( No, I'm not one of those wierdos that goes around fawning over him and calling him "Veggie-chan." *shudders*

YEY YOURE THE MAN!

Though the story is a good idea, it is very hard to read and Vegeta is way out of character. Otherwise, good job.

Ohhhh this is getting good...Keep going keep going...

-CatsAngel

dang youre good! ceep up the righting

hiya...just a hint, if u save the chapter as a html document in word, then you'll have proper spacing and it'll be a lot easier to read (unless u don't have word of course.)...and you'll also get more reviews if you accept anonymous reviews coz ppl are lazy and they can't be bothered logging in most of tha time.

Laterz!

Hurry up width the next chapter! I cant wait!