Pretty good one. Although this review came 4 years after the story was published--*smacks forehead*-- I do hope you'll be able to read this. One correction though: It's Kanan, not Kannon. ^.^

nice. pls update soon! you dont see some fics like these evryday. there are only few hakkaiyaone fans out there and even fewer fics that we can find. most go for the yaone/kougaiji fics. i hope that the next one will be better than this. ;p

You really should continue this fic. It's good. UPDATE soon.

HI!! I LOV YOUR FIC SO PLEASE UPDATE AND CONTINUE!! K?

Judging from the date this was uploaded...nearly a year ago, I guess it's safe to assume you'll never be finishing this. That's really too bad, I thought this was a great start.

THIS is the only Hakkai/Yaone in an R-Rated place.I have to do something about this.Seriously.
(Oh, if you're wondering who am I, I'm a H/Y author.)*ceres17 ponders*should Unbreakable goes to an R-rating?.After all TWO people has said there's already sexual intimacy.Gotta ask my reviewers...

A Saiyuki fic that pairs Hakkai with a woman? These are...non-existent. Even though it was short, that was certainly a good start. I hope you update soon.

This is so nice...and bautiful... Why is it R? I didn't like the last sentence though. Makes it seem pointless... It would be really nice if you continued. *hint hint*

Eh? That's it??

>< Yeah, the obvious SOMETHING betwen Hakkai and Yaone is begging to be explored... This start is well-written and promising, do continue!

*spork!*

That's it? can't u update faster PLEASE!

Your fanfic's really nice so please continue it soon! I also hope you read my fanfics that are coming soon. Ja-ne!

WHAT?!? That's it? No more?!? PLease, for the love of Saiyuki, in CHo Gono/Hakkai's good name, PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!! Hyperventilating, hyperventilating...

I know this is stupid..but can u continue the fic?

Pleasssssseee!!!!! Thanks a lot!!!!

This is so cool!! Pls. Continue if this isn't a one-shot! And if you can, please read *my* Hakkai/Yaone fic...hee hee hee... PLS> CONTINUE!!!

hmmm.... is this a one-shot fic? i hope not! ^_^ pls continue!